| "The Model Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyaw-Nyaw-Kun On: May 06, 2005 20:45 CDT
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Awwww, so kawaii!
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Reviewed By: Mantha Kaiba On: May 03, 2005 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fanfic! It was really sweet and really hot at the same time...I'm really glad that you completed this fanfic...good job!
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Reviewed By: xamosy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah! it's finally the last chapter! i love the lemon! it's soo nice! hehe... and the slave-master thing was very interesting! hehe... keep up the good work! xamosy^-^
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (too lazy to log in) On: May 02, 2005 21:15 CDT
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KAWAII! I love this so much! I can't wait for your next story! I eagerly await the alert! WHEEE! I promise to update mine soon too...
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:12 CDT
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Aww, how cute! A makeup scene. ^.^ I would vote for Stealing My Heart because I love Ryou/Bakura, and I don't like OC/Canon sex scenes. But that's just me and my weirdness.
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Title: chjburke@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Silveriss On: May 02, 2005 16:43 CDT
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I've loved this fic. It's a great concept and it's very sweet. It's a little short for my taste but I don't know what it's lacking so all I can say is that it works. I guess I'm saying that some sections seem a bit rushed... Or like they were written as an afterthought. I think it most particularly applies to Pedro's revenge. it just seems left unfinished, unrefined. I would like to see some justice for those two, particularly a charge of defamement would be nice, perhaps theft because, technically, those photographs would be Atemu's and if he didn't have a direct contract with the publisher of the photos than they, quite literally, can't print/post them. Did you know that doing that posting pictures like that could, concievably ruin a company in lawsuits and a lack of trust with future photographers. Word gets around among the art community. If an artist hears about another artist getting swindled by a company they usually start abandoning that company in droves. That includes posting personal photo/artwork that is not detailed in a clear contract. But I degress. I'm an illustrator and photographer by trade so I know how the system works. There are actually a lot of checks to keep the artists looked-after. Anyway, about your next fic. I"ve been craving a lot of Ryou/Bakura lately so I cast my vote for that one. I'll watch out for either fic though. I do love your style of writing. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: NarikoSukashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and am sad that its gonna end, but all good things must come to an end I guess.... ::sigh:: well i think that both stories you suggested will be good. why not work on both at once? if u dont want to thats cool, but you could still be satisfying both parties. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: May 02, 2005 08:01 CDT
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*looks at her own review* out of the door? *shakes her head* well I have no idea what I was thinking about but that's not what I meant... pretend it says 'two' instead of 'door'...lol ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: May 02, 2005 08:00 CDT
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Heya...good chapter ^-^ .....I think that 'stealing my heart' would be my choice out of the door...but both of them are cool ideas. ^-^ update soon..I'll be looking for the last chapter ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: xamosy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh, hehe, i absolutely love this fic! it's really lovely! you really make them hate each other and love each other at the right time... Yami is really a little OCC here, but i still love it. keep up the good work and update soon! xamosy^-^
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (who is too lazy to log in) On: May 02, 2005 06:44 CDT
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I like the idea of both of them, but "Stealing My Heart" sounds the most interesting!
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Reviewed By: forever broken ( to lazy to log in) On: May 02, 2005 05:00 CDT
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wow.. this is such a good fic! I really love it! it's a pitty it's going to end so soon! and I must say I would love to read about 'stealing my heart' (was that the name?) please go on with that fic! forever broken
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Reviewed By: Yami Ashley On: May 02, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, and I am sad to say I haven't given you a review yet, but here I go! *lol* Anyway, I love this whole story you've built up! About the next fic, I have forgotten the names *already* but I think the Bakura/Ryou one would suite me most ^^; Anyway, that's my opinion! Good work!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 16:57 CDT
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O.O Yami... prostitute?! Holy crap... at least he and Yugi made up... er, sorta. I'm still hoping that Yami or Yugi punches Pedro, just for fun. That was a REALLY good lemon... cya!
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Reviewed By: xamosy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 12:59 CDT
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oh dear, shit man!!! how in the world did they end up in such a crazy, misunderstanding scandal!!! update soon! i am soo loving this fic! How in the world could Yuugi don't believe Yami? and how many people had yami (fu*k) before yuugi came finding him? update soon, ok? ^-^ (puppy eyes) xamosy^-^
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