| "My So Called Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: uhh... On: September 10, 2005 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
k, first, your writing is really nice, i really like it, but...did you just copy the manga? maybe adding a little more originality to it would bring some more spice into the whole plot; instead of following the plot exactly
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Reviewed By: firelily On: June 26, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
It seems like all you did was rewrite the first chapter of the actual manga. That's called plagiarism.
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
You're following the manga real closely. Are you trying to put the manga into a fiction? Or are you going to go off on your own tangent? So far its pretty well written though! Though, to me, it moves a bit fast, but agian that's just my oppinion! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ...... On: March 23, 2005 22:05 CST
Comment/Review:
what have you done?! not only have you destroyed what is sacred but you put everything down the garbage as well....i am a devout fan of miki aihara's and i may as well think that you have blasphemed...stop...please...while you're still ahead....just stop
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