| "Flesh Entwined" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jessy_J On: March 07, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was beautifully written. I loved the way she was intense,loving,caring,& gental. Also I loved how he was so innocent. I also loved how it was like a poem within a story. Absolutly georgus. But who was the other character?
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Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving you a ten because I enjoyed it, (which surprised me, I didn't think I would just cause I've fancied myself a romantic critic. O_o) *lol* Anyway, it was very romantic and sweet and WELL written. :D A/U, because I get the general impression that Chichi wouldn't nessisarily be all that impressed with Piccolo if she ever met him in the series... (I don't know if she ever does.) Um, justa wondering where on earth Goku was during this... it was never defined, and Piccolo is kinda sleeping with his wife. -_-;; |
Reviewed By: Karla On: November 06, 2001 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, WOW. You are definitely my favourite author, you know that? Such exquisite attention to detail...I wish I could write like this!
*sighs happily* Those two are so cute together...Good thing Goku's not around...*grin* |
Reviewed By: Cat chan On: November 20, 2001 23:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh...that was so cool,to be honest I thought that Gohan was going to walk in and catch them...heh but I was wrong.
I think others should read this story it's awesome!!! |
