| "Paradise of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo the plot thickens! Dun dun dun. Good fic, nice twist on the concept. This Tray guy is new, and yes people are blonde with strawberry blonde hair, my little sister was. Anyway...keep writing. I smell lemons in the near future. Hee! ^_^
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Title: Paradise Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Paradise Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: wickedthunder02 On: November 14, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated all ten because it was a great story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jade Fox On: September 07, 2005 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
this cliffy was great!! but arg! i want to know what is going on!! i think the guys like go into heat or something during a certain moon... is vegeta going nuts with Bulma too?
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Title: Paradise Of The Moon
Reviewed By: MoonGirlGochi On: August 30, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write, I can really fill everthing that is happening in the story, please update and keep writing.
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Title: Paradise Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was pretty good, many 'close' calls for the girls, plz continue it plz plz plz plz
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 06:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really writtena and i really enjoy reading it, please update really soon, i just love crossovers expecially when serena is with the ever sexy trunk *sigh* :) update soon please *silver moon goddess
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Reviewed By: wintershadow On: April 27, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have to hurry and make a fourth part that was sooooooo goood i can't wait
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