Title: Great Start!
Reviewed By: Blackmore [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you deliver alot of emotion in just a few words, hence I quickly found myself really feeling for Aya. I hope you update soon, although given your summary I almost dread the outcome. You are very talented and I was disappointed that this is your only story thus far.
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