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| "Shinomegami" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ketsuki On: November 06, 2001 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
You know, if anyone knows how the author can read their stories' reviews, then can you please tell me? Cause I have no idea...And e-mail your response to me. Cause if you review it to me, I won't be able to read it.
So, does anyone like this fic? I hope so! I spent so long organizing this idea and arranging the storyline....It'll truely be a waste if nobody likes it! | Reviewed By: Duece of Spades On: November 07, 2001 16:41 CST
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It's really quite good so far, but Intro. is a little confusing. Some more detail could be used in describing the Shinomegami. I get the feeling that these goddesses were characters from different (anime) series, but I can be slow....so...Well, I can't really go futher into critiqueing because I can't really find that much to correct. Please continue. |
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