| "Western Lands" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Drianax1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story, but where did Sess go after the wish was made, and is there a reason as to why he left a deer on Kag's doorstep (aside from letting a potential mate be aware that the male can provide for her)? Please update soon! Do you have an email alert system for when you update? If so, could you place me on it (my email is Deborah_Lemieux5@msn.com)? Thanks, and update quickly!!!
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Title: sess/kags
Reviewed By: ccwilgar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot,sexy,humorous,misterious and exciting. I love this story. Please update. I will be checking up on the continuation of this story.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I can't wait to read more. Please keep going with this story and Update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Miara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Off to a great start - for a story at least, since I'm pretty sure that Kagome doesn't think a corpse on the porch is a great start to a courtship (not sure I do either, but we'll see). Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:41 CST
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I love it! Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It does not "demonize" Kikyou, and actually goes into how Kikyou alive is very different from Kikyou undead. You have a wonderfully original aproach to the Sess/Kag relationship here, and you have my heartfealt thank for not making it cliche. I think it's great that you've addressed how that, sometimes, you can really NOT be interested in ANYONE. Most people have Kagome go straight from loving Inu to loving Sess, or from Heartbreak to loving Sess. That aproach is corny and overdone. Also, I love the whole "demon courtship" thing, and how you had Kagome react to the blood and the deer. It was extremely funny, and I loved it. When will we be seeing what's going on behind Sess's mask? What's his reasoning, huh? Does he actually like her, or is it more of an alliance type thing with friendship on the side, huh? anyway, I love what you've done with this, and I want to see more of Kikyou and Sesshoumaru in this fic, they are both really intresting charas...... Kin-chan Pandun...... PS-The whole "girl talk" thing was a very nice touch.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wate to find out what's gonna happen keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEUPDATE SOON ^_^ IT A GREAT STORY AND I WANT TO NO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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