| "A Never-Ending Love" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: May 13, 2005 15:47 CDT
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Ok Kags is a wench. I never thought I could ever hate her like this. Sess is an ass too (just at the end of this chapter). Why didn't he go with Rin or tell Kagome off or tell her it has been over between them. He better be moving out asap. I like your story alot since you've given Rin, sess's usual personality (ice) and Sess rin's usual personality (nice). It's a great story but you have me waiting full of angst for your next chapter. So please put me out of my misery soon. Keep up the great job.
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Title: wonderful chap ^_^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I loved this chap! Drama/angst rulez doesn't it ^^ don't worry girl you will get many more reviews that I promise you, 'cause this is just a creap chap and you put down the carakters down so well, it's all so original! I really liked this chap, poor Rin, but I can understand Kagome's anger, I mean woulsn't you be as mad as her if you where in her position?! *looks around* well i would! anyway, i love the twist you gave to the story, it's so unprodictable that i love it! I'm so sorry that my grammar sucks ass but my spell check isn't installed on my computer yet (i had a virus and had to install EVERYTHINg again *sigh*) UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!!!! Big K!$$ and Lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: GREAT STORY! On: May 13, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't wait until you update again. This story is turning out better than I could have imagined. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Ebony-Rose On: May 13, 2005 11:02 CDT
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HEY! I'm loving the story so far. Poor Rin, it seemz all the authors/authoresses love antagonizing the poor girl. Kagome is such a b*tch in your story! LOL! Anywayz keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 29, 2005 20:40 CDT
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I forgot to ask you this question on AFF.net. How did Hojo die?? Please explain that in you next update. Thanks
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Title: So cute and sad chappie
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Always to lazy to login) On: April 29, 2005 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awh this chapter was so sweet and sad at the same time. Rin and Sesshoumaru got a little bit closer and Rin doesn't have to be scared to hurt Kagome anymore. I hope Kagome will find some one else *cough* Inu *cough* Yasha! Rin's life is so sad with the lost of their parents and then Hojo. You put all the characters in a very nice place inn your story, you didn't go for the standard Kouga who's after Kagome or Hojo who's a loser and Sesshoumaru who falls directly for Rin. In most stories the head characters meet each other in the first chap and it's love at first site *hides from angry people who wrote fanfic's like that* he I'm not saying the standard stuff is bad, just saying that it's nice to have a change ^^ I hope Kagome understands that Sesshoumaru and Rin are becoming more closer and that she won't get mad about it. She said it herself she was quite bored with him. Just wanted to say one thing and that is: I wish I had a car like Rin got from Hojo, then you could push it all you want and everyone in my way I'll use as speed bumps ^^ … well enough silly talk for now, I hope you update very soon! Big K!$$ and Lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: JJ On: April 22, 2005 00:36 CDT
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The past(almost) 3 days have been the longest, I've been checking for updates every morning, afternoon, and evening. Please try to update this soon, I've been recomending it to people and I really can't handle suspense. Great story
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Reviewed By: JRJB On: April 19, 2005 22:05 CDT
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OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOooooo I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please post it ASAP. Wonderful, superb, terrific, amazing. Keep going. *hugs you* Thankyou
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Title: Little_Tennyo
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand a update ^^ i luv this fic!
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Title: I Love This Fic!!
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a really big fan of this fic. I love your writing. I hope that Sesshoumaru and Rin get together. I really dislike the whole Sesshoumaru/Kagome thing. But I love this fic and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: JRJB On: April 16, 2005 06:46 CDT
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I love your story, you have to finish, if you don't I'll go crazy. You are just too good with suspense. Keep going, you're doing great.
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Title: MORE CHAPPIES PLZ
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (To lazy to login) On: April 14, 2005 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, a great chap ^^ hooray sesshy is in the story now, poor kag's will get her heart broken :( owh well, plz make it up with her do let her meet inu yasha, plz or else it will eb so sad for her (sees everyone staring weird and saying: it's only a story) ahem ... well let inu live in america allready or something PLZ PLZ PLZ, and update son *starts pushing you towards the computer* come one! UPDATEEEEE ^^ bubai, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: Nahajaretmew On: April 07, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. Although I have a feeling that Rin may somewhat reflect your own personality (which isn't a bad thing). But I love your writing and I hope that you update soon.
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Title: HOORAY AN UPDATE
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again a great chap ^^ update soon! Big K!$$ and lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: ravenwing On: March 18, 2005 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this story soooo much! I liked how u started out things! It was written very well. I love stories with Rin in them and i think that it's sooooo cool that she is ur main character. Keep Writing!!! Looking Forward to another update! ^_^
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