Title: Omg This Is SO GOOD!!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Always To Lazy To Login) On: March 14, 2005 06:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story starts off so good! I must know how it goes further! I'm defiantly going to login after this review and putting you in my fav. List! This story is put down so well and I hope you update very soon. You put everything down so well, like I'm watching a film (only then reading it) I'm really impressed by this story and I really want to know what happens next! You also type long chapter and that's really cool, haha. Most chapters I read in like 5 minutes (yes that also includes mine so please people don't be insulted!). I really hope you update soon, or else I'll simply drag you behind your computer and force you ^^ I think the story line in witch you made this story is very good as well. You gave everyone nice characters, and it's also nice you put Kohaku in the picture! Is this a Kagome/Inu Yasha fic as well?! I'm guessing your not telling me that and that I just have to read to find it out, owh well I'll read it anyway ^^ since this story is 'bout Rin and not Kagome (but I was just curious 'bout Kagome ^^) owh well I'm talking crap again and probably scaring you whaha. Yay I'm the first one to review, hooray! Again: UPDATE SOON, I love your story! And don't mind my grammar English isn't my first language and I believe I've made a lot of mistakes in this review (just ignore it) bubai, K!$$ and lots of love ~ Little Tennyo
|
