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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yikes! The ending was tough. It was really good, overall. Looks like Duo wasn't adversely affected by his period of captivity, though. That's good.
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Reviewed By: Mynona On: May 07, 2005 03:26 CDT
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I've read quite a lot of yoru work but I'm a lazy reviwer. Anyways, I loved this story, and not only for the sex, but for the mindset. And of course, the end. It was great. I'm happy now and I'll probably go around all day being it.
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Reviewed By: Desdamona On: May 06, 2005 22:42 CDT
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I have to agree with the other reviewer, the ending did seem rushed, unlike your other stories. And the last bit about Zechs and Noin, it was just... odd, not completely satisfying and kind of out in left field.
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 12:03 CDT
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The ending... feels to rushed, it doesn't feel like it ended... It could have used one more chapter to it all... but... its just my opinion, just feels kinda empty... Duo gets caught gets found then gets 'some' *shrugs* but anyways, I did enjoy the fic so continue the great work and keep working it!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: April 29, 2005 08:13 CDT
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Excellent fic.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Heero Found Duo!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: April 27, 2005 09:20 CDT
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That was certainly an action-packed chapter! Don't know what to think about Milliardo, whether it's better for him to die or face the multiple charges that he's bound to be arrested for should he live. I'm sure recovery for Duo won't be a snap either, unless the time during his abduction and rescue are completely wiped out of his memory. If he was embarrasseed for his friends to know he was naked, just imagine how he'd feel if they knew the truth of what happened to him. Wonderful writing... as always.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: April 26, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"A figure appeared at the end of the hallway. A nightmare figure in a black coat that flowed behind him as he walked steadily towards Duo. The man's dark sunglasses, and the gunmetal of his two glocks, caught the light of a bare, over head bulb as he raised them and began firing both at the same time." Very nice! And did you just see "Sin City"? If not, I bet you'd love it. It's just like this! Great action, great progress, and thank you so much for getting them together this far before ending the chapter! Excellent writing as always.l
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write the next part soon - I'm worried about Duo. He's bleeding all over the place! Sorry I haven't reviewed this before - I wasn't sure I was going to like this one. A little bit too much mind control, ya know? But this chapter made me want to review cause Duo finally snapped out of it and acted like he's supposed to.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 26, 2005 19:14 CDT
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whew! *i seem to be saying that a lot lately* I'm glad that gang didn't violate Duo! Damn and when he's taken to the doc, surely they'll check for all possible injuries. how would duo react to findout that his drunken state had landed in the world of pleasure slaves and his rape(s)? In a flashback that cut through the drugs Duo said he had been waiting for heero to show some interest in him, so hadn't been sexually active with anyone if his interest in heero heldout since the war. *shrugs* They must of found that dead guy and still undressed with evidence of his abuse of Duo through the DNA left behind. But hey, they was no mention that he was bleeding from anywhere else, which is unlikely even for a gundam pilot if we think about what happen to him at the show case. And he may not feel the pain now but *shrugs* who knows. update soon.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:04 CDT
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THAnK YOU!! now please an immediate update is needed!! Gotta know if Duo will be ok once autopilot turns off. Will he go back to what he knee as home? He's probably bleeding -felt something in him rip- will he pass out and be taken to hospital, if so who will find him first? Please let it be Heero?!?
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 18:34 CDT
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ch3- damn... well atleast the drugs are lessen, but will Duo remember all these things when heero gets him and removes the thing out of his arm? hurry heero...
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Reviewed By: strangerinthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Finally Duo get to kick some a$$. I cannot wait to read what a drugged up amnesic running solely on solder's trained will get up to. I hope Heero ends up beating the sh..snot out of Zechs. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0..... I LOVE IT^_^!!!!!!!
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Title: Oh Yeah!!!!
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: April 07, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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