| "Homework........ Help?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: uhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was definitely something different.I will say that was good because some of it was pretty creative.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
errrrr O.o fast, hard, yet some-what romantic at the very end...i like it!!!! and i love this pairing XD you read the one where Kurama "helps" Yusuke learn how to dance? omg you should! but i forget what site it's on x.X
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: May 05, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo much fun! It was my first ever Yusuke/Kurama fic but it rocked!! Please write some more. I really love your style, its as uniqe as your paring. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 03:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Look, I know you hate typing and all, as you say, but you're really going to have to get over that if you want to post stories. You want your readers to be able to understand things. Like explain to us why Yusuke wanted Kurama, and some of the emotions that were going through them. For this to happen though, you're going to have to get over that little 'I hate to write' thing you have going on there. Also, your grammar needs a little bit of fixing up, you may want to find a BETA for that, try signing up on the mm.org forums, there are BETA's on there that I am sure would be glad to help you out. Oh and one more quick thing... Spirit Cuffs ARE NOT sex toys!
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 23:07 CDT
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*Blushing like a really red apple* Wow... that was... something. I can't really describe it. It's really sexy in a way and yet painful. I find it very different from other stories I've read. Keep up the good work! I hope I see more of your work! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Title: it said i wasn't logged in
Reviewed By: kuramalvr6/sydney On: April 07, 2005 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello there, wow a kurama and yusuke fic...this is the first one i've ever read and it good! i like it very much! i shall wait for the next chapter and until then Ja ne
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Title: it said i wasn't logged in
Reviewed By: kuramalvr6/sydney On: April 07, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there, wow a kurama and yusuke fic...this is the first one i've ever read and it good! i like it very much! i shall wait for the next chapter and until then Ja ne
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Reviewed By: nli On: March 27, 2005 09:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Hm. Ditto what everyone else said; these are too short to be called chapters. In fact, both chapters put together are still too short to be a single chapter. Why not write a little more of the story before you post it?
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Reviewed By: k-girl1 On: March 16, 2005 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
write the next chapture and make it longer ok
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that is really short. You should make the chapter a little longer and put some more details in it. It isn't that I don't like the idea but you need to put a few ideas with the plot to the story. I love shonen-ai's(Yaoi's) as much as the next girl but it needs more juice to it. But since I'm a nice girl, I'll let this slide for once. I take Shonen-ai's very seriously but I'm giving you a chance.(that is very rare from me) Please update soon! And work out the bugs in your story! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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