| "A New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: FireDragon On: August 30, 2001 01:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eep. O_o WAAAAHHHHH!!!!! That was sad. And we didn't even get any Goku/Vegeta action. *pouts* Pretty good though, but I might suggest a beta-reader, and or spellcheck. |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade On: September 05, 2001 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting you should do something on what Goku does with Chichi |
Reviewed By: Silent Shadow On: October 30, 2001 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG... that was weird and deppresing... and dirty. What a way to end it. |
