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Title: Great Job Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 22:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great job on your stroy. You have a very good plot line and an intresting writing style. The only problems I could find were some some minor spelling and gramatical errors. Keep going, I can't wait to read the sequel.
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Reviewed By: spriggan_d [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 04:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: now that was the cutest and most hilarious story i've ever read. nice job.
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Reviewed By: Princess Kitana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 05:40 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i like this fic! update soon! i wanna see what happens when Naruto tells everyone it's him!
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