| "A Darker Shade of Pale" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
For some crazy reason I felt motivated to time how long it took to read you're author's note for the prologue. You were right, 20 seconds :) Well, 19.98 seconds, to be exact. Which is damned close enough. Can't really make any comments on the story, not enough there yet. But you can look at the nice numbers I left for you.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 01:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was pretty good. i hope you keep it up ^^ lol, yash actually seems pretty in char, wich is rare in AU fics. i hope kags comes along soon enough
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Reviewed By: RogueSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know how you feel, i think after i finish my story im going to quit writing for awhile. i luv the story i hope you finish it too.
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope you plan on finishing this fic, i love it.
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed those beginning chapters, i thought they were awsome! and are you planning on finishing this fic?
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Reviewed By: Rogue-Xile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 07:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice, I like it, keep writing, I'm very exiceted as to what will happen next and no, it wasn't a waste of 8 minutes of my life...more like 15, just kidding lol.
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