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Reviewed By: randomreviewer On: May 21, 2010 23:32 CDT
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I like how you brought the characters into the mind via Yugi's body. And Kaiba makes such a fun anti-hero. The quotes on the doors were nice, kind of reminded me of the riddle on the door from the Lord of the Rings. I'll be sure to check out your other stories.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 16:24 CST
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Alright, you do a good job of setting up suspense, and of keeping the clutter clear. However there are one or two points that can be fixed. One thing is that Yami calling Yugi his hikaru(sp)... It isn't really necessary... You could go with several other things. I didn't see any typos or grammer problems, so that's a good thing. You paragraphs are nicely spaced, and the flow is relatively smooth. I guess the sickly feel I'm having is just my own response to this. (Blood, gore, death by desises.. ew.) Then again that seems to be the feel you're going for, so good for you! Keep submitting to FFARG! ^.^
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Title: LETHALY HOT
Reviewed By: STEELFETHER11 On: November 02, 2005 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorate yugioh fanfic yet! you are a really good ritter, i didnt rate you on the grammer becase mine stinkls. supperb story line!
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST NON-YAOI STORY I EVER READ!! although there are some hints of yami/yugi.. hehe i was so ansious for you to finish! i'm not a patient person, really i hope the sequel will be up soon.. you write awsomely!! keep it up! oh, and writing a little yaoi in the sequel won't be too bad.. hehe take care yamimylove
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Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 15:54 CDT
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if u leave us in suspense in the next chappie, will u make a sequel? oh yeah, this is a yami/yugi pairing isn't it? or the starting of one since...uh whatever chapter it started. but other than that it was the best!!!! i like it...almost cried on some parts...but neat fic!!! update soon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: Yami Val [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutley great especially with all the research that you have done. Please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens in the end I have read this fic at least 4 times already and can't wait to see what happens with Yami and Yugi.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 07:57 CDT
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This fic is so great and all the research is wonderful. Great job. Please update, soon. I absolutely love it.
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Reviewed By: The_queen_of_Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!! And as promised, for what i said in my review of bible stories YGO style, I'm giving you the new stage and me as your sponsor!!!!!!
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 16:09 CDT
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You updated just in time. I was just starting to think something happened to you. Then I thought maybe it was cause mediaminer stopped sending out notices, but fanfiction.net didn't. Anyway great chapter I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I love seeing miracles happen. Update soon , please.
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Reviewed By: just sum1 On: July 18, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and finish this cause I love it! and u better have a god reason for notupdating, or I'll...I'll... Neila:Yes, go on! Your sounding threatning...^^ Me: Get my Yami to beat you up!!! Neila:-.-''' For crying out loud... Me:^^ Well update, it's cool. Oh, a don't be as graphic in the bloody scenes cause I still smell like Neila lunch. Problem? It came outta her mouth and I had no explaination for my ma, pa and bro when they saw me! I smelt like tossed cookies for weeks!
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Title: Continue PLZ
Reviewed By: just sum1 On: July 08, 2005 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WUZ AWSOME!!!! PLZ CONTINUE, I'M BEGGING HERE, UPDATE, PLZ, I LUV THIS STORY, I WANNA SEE IF THEY ALL LIVE. But if u r going through a rough time, soz4 the rudnes, but I'm getting impateint to find out the story.
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Reviewed By: Sonja Edachi, Damien Edachi and Jake Rifle On: June 09, 2005 23:29 CDT
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(Sonja):*heart eyes and drools* (Jake):*Swirly eyes and drools* (Damien):Umm... They wanted to say update soon but my sister is drolling over how cool Yami was during the battle and Jake fainted when he saw all that bloodshed.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 16:55 CDT
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yay! lots of updates! ^_^ great job!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am upset, I just wrote a really long review and I was not signed in again. I love the way this went and I really love the time and effort you have put into this. The research must take hours but if it means anything I am grateful for it. I like the literary references and appreciate the book titles I know what to look for now. Lord of the Rings is my favorite trilogy, the movies although well done do not compare to the books. I am begging shamelessly for you to update soon, even though I think I just read 5 chapters. Great job. Keep it up.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I love the research and explanations. Mediaminer, however is driving me crazy. I have had to sign in after every chapter to leave a review. Oh well, now to the next chapter.
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