| "Kagome-Mama and the Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: emmett1909 On: April 09, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good structure to the story...has rhythm and balance...change of pace adapts smoothly...good formative description....sometimes, it gets busy and emotion drives into a swirling wind...less adjective usage will make your story easier to focus on development...enjoyable to read and very good effort for character portrayal....31/2 out of 5 stars...
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Reviewed By: Miko_Goddess69 On: March 28, 2005 22:14 CST
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i like your story sofar and i liked to see how it ends
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 15, 2005 00:46 CST
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cliffie aaahhh!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 07, 2005 12:17 CST
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really great first chapters!! haha I love inuyasha's character and man those kisses *swoon* please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: bbb2 On: March 06, 2005 16:52 CST
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nice one, interesting, I want to see more. PLEASE?! thank ya,bbb
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