| "Kagome-Mama and the Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: The best!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry I haven't been abl to review for so long. A lot has been going on in my family. But I finally got to read the last two chapters today and I absolutely love them! The ending was really good. Personally, I hink you definately have the material for a sequal. Particularly comedic one. You did excellent work and I can't wait to go read your other stuff. P.S. I would love to see a hentai fic with Seshy. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:55 CDT
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I missed the memo that this chapter was up. I'm glad I found it. I like this chapter. You're evil for leaving it on such a cliffy, but that's ok. I'll hunt you down after the story is over. Teehee. ^_^ Look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why the hell did u do that? ill kill u!!! i swear i will. wait i dont have anything to kill u w/ *thinks a moment* ill kill u when i get a freakn' sword dammit!!!! lol update soon ^.^ *mutters* 'im still gonna kill u' \./
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Reviewed By: *inuluvher151* On: July 04, 2005 14:20 CDT
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this was an alright cahpter can't wait until you update poor shippo hope he's alright
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh...short but sweet, I wonder is the last sword the one from the third movie,and why does she have all the swords, and she was brought to the Higurashi Family, who is she really??? those are my questions I'll keep reading to find the answers
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 00:50 CDT
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hey this is a really great story. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IM SOOOOO HAPY YOU UPDATED....KEEP IT UP I LOVE THIS STORY
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Title: Long time no see
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the crystal cave scene, it seems familier to me somehow, but anyway I loved it...I hope you are able to get out more chapters before you move...its getting really interesting right now...
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST ONE YET!!! And talk about dedication. I'm in Greece right now and have to pay to use the internet. Yet I still HAD to read this chapter when I saw that it was posted. This was a beautiful chapter. Can't wait for the next one and good luck on the move.^_^
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Title: X
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hhummm *skratches chin* I wonder, where ever would one come up with they Idea of big shine swords coming out of pretty girls...Thats the first time I've read anything CLAMP like in a Inuyasha fic, and I have to admit that it was kind of nice, I always loved they way X seemed to make a bloody mess look bueatiful, and you seem to weave that imagery with the sceans in this fic...well done...oooh lest I forget, you limes predict a very steamy lemon in the future, I'll have to come back for more to see if its true.
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 15:54 CDT
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Omg i loved it~!!!!! Keep up the good work !
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You practically wrote it for me...I feel loved!^_^ Excelent chapter. Kagome can't die! It's against the rules. (Who mades these rules, I don't know. But it's against the rules o_O) I hope you feel better soon. As to Sesshy and Rin, that would be great. I just posted my own Rin and Sesshy story yesterday. Over 100 people have read it, but no one has reviewed. MM really stinks at that. That's why I always try to review, especailly on the ones I really enjoy...like yours!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:39 CDT
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I like your story but it is difficult to read because all the paragraphs run together. Every time a different person speaks, a new action or subject of thought takes place, a change in the point of view (narrative) occurs, or a change in the place or time occurs, you should start a new paragraph. Only one person should speak per paragraph. Pick up a paperback novel and look at the paragraph structure. Follow that and you will improve your grammar/composition/structure problems. Also, you should place a blank line between each paragraph in order to make your story easier for the readers' eyes to follow each line (and not get lost in a huge block of script) and therefore easier to read. I wrote this review after reading the first chapter. I'll read the rest too, but I hope when you update, you consider your readers and format your story for easy reading. Thank you.
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I'm so happy you got the next chapter up! Thank you a million times over. This was a really good one and I can't wait to see what Sesshy and Yasha plan to do. Tell your muse to get cracking, and the soda-bottle indused fractures you gave her don't count. ^_^
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Title: Adiction!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That overall rating should actually have another 0 attached. I absolutel love this story. This is positively the BEST hentai I have ever read!!! (And believe me, I read quite a few) I've noticed a few grammar things here and there, but it doesn't matter. I want to be an English teach, so for me to be so distracted by a story that I don't care correct grammar, that story has got to be good. PLEEEEEEEEEEASE write again soon. You have me completely addicted to your story. Drink all the soda pops that you need to. ^_^
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