Title: Reflection review
Reviewed By: Sagakure [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your fic, and I really liked it! ^_^/ I hope you'll write more Saint Seiya fics. I particularly liked the way you inserted the other Saga into the fic, and I absolutely loved the way it all comes into place with the reason why Saga can have equilibrium now because of Kanon. It's a very sweet fic, and even Saga's evil self fits well into it. ^_^ Onto a funny coincidence, I just posted my first Saint Seiya fic myself and it's also a Kanon x Saga one! Except it's one of my first fics period, while I saw that you had already written many fics, so you have a lot more experience. (I just joined Mediaminer). ^_^/ It's not that big of a coincidence considering that there are so many fans of the twins out there, but still, I was amused.^_^ I really hope you'll write more Saga x Kanon. ^^ One last little thing, grammar only : your English is really good (mine isn't my first langage either ^^;), but you often add an unnecessary "s" to the verbs. It's not a big problem or anything, but when Kanon says "Saga please stops it!", it kinda catches the reader's eye. I hope my review was helpful, and I'd be really happy if you dropped by and got a look at my fic. ^_^ Mine doesn't have that great of a plot (I wrote it mostly for the smut, *lol*), but there's Saga and Kanon in it... ^^ *yum* *lol* If you do read it, please tell me what you think of it? Best, Sagakure
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