| "Love at first sight" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Love At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 07, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!! Can you write some more chapters? *whines: i hate cliffhangers!* Please hurry and finish the rest of the story!
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Title: It ROCKS!!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story kicks ass!!! I can't wait 'till you update again. I don't care how long the chapters are when you update, just as long as you do it! Peace out, Sakag
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Reviewed By: MLF On: June 29, 2005 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS F*IN HOT...PLEASE WRITE MORE AND LONGER THIS TIME ^.^
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Title: Love At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: i like it a lot
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love Pan and Trunks coupleing. I wish people would do it more often. your story is really good. I hope you keep updateing.
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Title: Love At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters. Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: Snowyweather On: April 11, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: nikodawg26 On: April 11, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good job just need to work on the updating factor
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Reviewed By: 27 On: April 10, 2005 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
"OW" brings a sense of pain. The word you're looking for is 'Oh'. Also, try to lay off the italics.
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: April 09, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first time reviewing any one so please keep writing thank you
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Title: Love At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: the maui chick On: March 13, 2005 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i loved it my sugestions are to make the chapters longer, and to follow the basic rules of structuring a stroy(new paragraph any time a new person speaks, sentence varity and so on). In spite of my sugestions i couldent write anything that good and the fact that you can stick with something like this shows that you are a stronger person than I. ok love the fic update soon peace -the maui chick
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Title: nice chapie
Reviewed By: mad ass fan On: March 08, 2005 05:27 CST
Comment/Review:
i fink it has potential but u shudn't rush it so much coz that messes things p a good build up is wot makes a great ficcie lol laterz
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