| "Unleashed" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 15:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool. It was a little hard to read but other than that it was great. I can totally imagin Kagome in a leather bikini and a leash and Inuyasha's libido going crazy because of it.
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it keep up the good work . Can't wait to read more from u !!!!!!
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Title: Unleashed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Grrrrr!
Reviewed By: shippogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! You act like I can't write or something! Bitch ass motherfuckers!....Gomen Nasai...(Baka)
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Title: You Forgot
Reviewed By: The Wolf Of Endless Winter On: March 24, 2005 17:48 CST
Comment/Review:
The pants are called hakama and the red shirt is called haori. There is a name for the undershirt but I forget what it is. I only saw i written once. You have a good sense of comedy but... a dog outfit? Well... hey it works! Nice job.
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Reviewed By: InuKaglover815 On: March 07, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! That was HILARIOUS!!!! I can just see the handprint on Miroku's face!!!!
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Title: It needs editing
Reviewed By: toro On: March 07, 2005 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too short. Not enough spacing and a few spelling and grammar errors. I could only really skim through it.
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Reviewed By: LadyDogDemon On: March 06, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have not even read it becouse it is all smooshed together use more spaces and people may reade it and not just look at it an pic another story hope ya do what i tell ya bye
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