| "its a...Beast Boy kinda Night!!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: gothic_raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
its a good story so far! update soom please...
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Reviewed By: Spider_Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know it's truely sad when only the last three pharagraphs in your story aren't crap. It was really no good. o'course I may have liked it if I was a moron & male, but I'm not. I'd love to read the next chapter though.
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Title: New chaps.
Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, good. I like em better than the first chap I still like your other story better but this one is good I wanna know what's going on with the thing Robin and The others went to so post again soon. ~~The truly wise express themselves for in expressions we find happiness~~
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Reviewed By: soul_stealer_25 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. Some of your other stories were better but I'm sure I'll like your story even more once you put up more chapters. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I think this is just a little below par on your last story but once the later chapters get going I'm sure it'll get better, keep it up and keep it real ~~The truly wise express themselves for in expressions we find happiness~~
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