| "Heroes" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2001 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, good chapter. Now Bulma's parents know what had been goin on between V/B. I can't wait to see what Veggie has up his sleeve. Later |
Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo!! That's what I'm talkin about! That 5th chapter rocked the house baby! I'm SO GLAD Gokou doesn't have to cope with that *BEEP* Chichi any more! In your fic...she's a nightmare. And Gokou deserves Bulma.
Glad you're back on your feet now too...and happy birthday! Merry christmas to y'all out there too! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 19, 2001 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!. Sorry I hadn't reviewed it before, been kinda busy with Xmas coming up and all. Anyway I love this story, I'm just sorry things fell apart between both couples. Can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, Happy Birthday and when you're thru partying, how about another chapter? Till later. |
Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear, what do I say to this? Lemme separate it into factors, I guess.
It was SCANDALOUS!!! I loved it! It's true that Gokou's a 'boob man'...as in he loves the tits over the ass...and I think with him goin after Bulma over Chichi was perfect, seeing as Bulma is CLEEAAAVAGE WOMAAAAN!!!!
It was kinda ooc, though Bulma was absolutely perfect. Gokou was...well...not Gokou! He was rather ooc for my liking, though I love this version of him, nonetheless. Gokou usually has a slightly cleaner mouth, except when he's ticked off. Vegeta...well...what can I say? Most of the time he loves Bulma, so this was an *interesting* change.
It's what I call a TEARJERKER. I dunno how you did it, but I was crying my eyes out the whole time.
Ya know...what I'd like to see happen...it's kinda evil, and very very off track from dbz...but Chichi decides to leave Gokou...Gohan goes with Gokou cuz Chichi's a bitch (in this fic at least...~_^)...Gokou kills Vegeta for being an asshole and cuz GOKOU RULES...and Bulma and Gokou get together! Ignore me if that's NOT what you had in mind...just thought I'd share ^_^
Latahz
-MiraiSonGokou |
Reviewed By: Nuku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2001 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Ya know Vegeta doesn't seem terribly OOC to me... I've just read the last chap and all that went running through my head was 'don't let it be Vegeta!' Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Misty On: November 27, 2001 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I am a V/B fan usually, but your story is way to good to not read!! I can't wait for more chapters, evil place for a cliffhanger!! |
Reviewed By: little goku On: November 21, 2001 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love ur fanfics.goku/bulma make a great couple.please make more and keep up the good job |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2001 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it like this cuz the way the story goes is really cool even in the songfic way, but still i really hate g/b pairing...v/b foreva!! |
Reviewed By: Molly chan On: November 08, 2001 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good, even though I LOVE the V/B pairing, you're actually making this believable! I'm waiting on more chapteeeerrrrs... *Drums her fingers inpatiently* |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 08, 2001 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story! Write more! (Ok, sorry if I scared you, I have a thing for Bulma/Goku fics! ) |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta On: November 08, 2001 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
it was pretty cool when i read it, but i really couldn't believe that vegeta would abuse bulma like that and then goku comes in and does it with bulma, who is much older than him. i showed this fic to my friend and she says that this fic is a living mockery of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship(she's a big b/v fan) well, keep at it...i think.. |
Reviewed By: ssj6rih On: November 11, 2001 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Write more. This is a really good fic. Please write faster and write alot more. |
Reviewed By: Cat chan On: November 13, 2001 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE it...oh no,hear come the tears again,No offence to the V/B fans but the G/B pairing is way better..by theway,
MOREMOREMOREMOREMORECHAPTERS
~_~*puppy dog face* |
Reviewed By: ssj6rich On: November 15, 2001 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the best fic I have ever read. Please put up more chapters or more fics like this one. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 00:36 CST
Comment/Review:
u know i dont really like how vejita is a mean idiot, yeah i know we all have our fantasys that hes not and i know he is a killer and all that crap but hey, i like to keep my fantasys, though i do like how your writing yor story its just not for me, my loss i guess, keep up your writing.
{:P |
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