"Heroes" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2002 13:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: Last time in your A/N you said people that live in a abusive home will most likely become abusive. Are you implying that I will hit my wife and kids. Because I used to get hit just for leaving a light on when nobody was in a room. You jsut hurt my feelings a little |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 16:37 CDT Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 16:06 CDT Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 19, 2002 00:58 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Before I review, I have to tell you how much I enjoyed your answer to that @$$hole flamer. It was almost as good as this chapter. You told him/her off and hopefully he/her will never bother you again. As far as this chap goes, so far it's my favorite. Not only was the lemon delicious, but there was some comic relief here and there. I love the way Yamcha is helping out Bulma train. All in all this was awesome. Can't wait for your update. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 22:30 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I can't wait to see what kind of training Goku has in mind for Bulma, besides the obvious (^_^). Good chapters. |
Reviewed By: PrincessBulma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 15:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh!! You are an increadible writer!! I don't normally go for G/B fics, but your's was GREAT! I loved it! I was almost in tears!! I wish I could be as good as an author as you! Update soon, please! Bulma HAS to win! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 09:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Bulma has to win...and she does have power...she survived being blown away on Namek and being chased by dinosaurs. And when captain Ginyu took over her body she had some nice moves as well... plus i think ChiChi should die...no matter what...pretty please? |
Reviewed By: MistyDea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 16:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story! *sighs* tired of me reviewing yet? TO BAD *evil smirl* may I say marveouls chapters and please write more
** MIsty loves ya! |
Reviewed By: kandi On: January 23, 2002 20:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this was the the crazes story i have every, but i enjoyed every minute of it. PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2001 04:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, good chapter. Now Bulma's parents know what had been goin on between V/B. I can't wait to see what Veggie has up his sleeve. Later |
Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 23:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whoo!! That's what I'm talkin about! That 5th chapter rocked the house baby! I'm SO GLAD Gokou doesn't have to cope with that *BEEP* Chichi any more! In your fic...she's a nightmare. And Gokou deserves Bulma.
Glad you're back on your feet now too...and happy birthday! Merry christmas to y'all out there too! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 19, 2001 06:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great Chapter!!. Sorry I hadn't reviewed it before, been kinda busy with Xmas coming up and all. Anyway I love this story, I'm just sorry things fell apart between both couples. Can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, Happy Birthday and when you're thru partying, how about another chapter? Till later. |
Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 20:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh dear, what do I say to this? Lemme separate it into factors, I guess.
It was SCANDALOUS!!! I loved it! It's true that Gokou's a 'boob man'...as in he loves the tits over the ass...and I think with him goin after Bulma over Chichi was perfect, seeing as Bulma is CLEEAAAVAGE WOMAAAAN!!!!
It was kinda ooc, though Bulma was absolutely perfect. Gokou was...well...not Gokou! He was rather ooc for my liking, though I love this version of him, nonetheless. Gokou usually has a slightly cleaner mouth, except when he's ticked off. Vegeta...well...what can I say? Most of the time he loves Bulma, so this was an *interesting* change.
It's what I call a TEARJERKER. I dunno how you did it, but I was crying my eyes out the whole time.
Ya know...what I'd like to see happen...it's kinda evil, and very very off track from dbz...but Chichi decides to leave Gokou...Gohan goes with Gokou cuz Chichi's a bitch (in this fic at least...~_^)...Gokou kills Vegeta for being an asshole and cuz GOKOU RULES...and Bulma and Gokou get together! Ignore me if that's NOT what you had in mind...just thought I'd share ^_^
Latahz
-MiraiSonGokou |
Reviewed By: Nuku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2001 17:26 CST Comment/Review: Ya know Vegeta doesn't seem terribly OOC to me... I've just read the last chap and all that went running through my head was 'don't let it be Vegeta!' Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Misty On: November 27, 2001 21:48 CST Comment/Review: I am a V/B fan usually, but your story is way to good to not read!! I can't wait for more chapters, evil place for a cliffhanger!! |
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