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| "Vacation Time" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: GigaBahamut [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O.O ....amazing...just plain amazing. Great job on the fanfic! Hope you'll make a ton of Yuri stories.
| Title: Lies
Reviewed By: Lord_InuYasha On: March 16, 2005 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Few facts about boys: Most are perverts, almost all guys like a little girl girl action, I myself love it (you should write more). I think its just natural that boys like Yuri while some girls like yaio. I myself am disgusted with yaio, but some people, eh. Good job. PLEASE WRITE MORE OR I SHAL SEND MY EVIL MIND CONTROL CHICKENS AFTER YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: aquiesced [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok. But it was run-on sentence galore, and yeah... i'm sure you can write better quality than that. I was fairly disappointed. I guess out of all your reviews i'm the only one who feels this way. But i'm only saying my opinion. Fin ~Lufia/Ash
| Reviewed By: The Tin On: March 09, 2005 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I probably didn't need that right now, but hey, I enjoyed it. Well, I have to admit, I don't usually go this "hardcore"(so I put it, as I have a horrible sense of description), so I can't really remark on the lemon. The story itself: To a non-fan, this may have been a little rushed. But I suppose if you're a fan of this pairing, and I am, you just assume they've felt something for each other like this. The hotel just unleashes the monster. I liked the way you ended it, also. And that is all. Again, I enjoyed this...but the main thought that was on my mind during this(besides thinking about Anzu) was if Jonouchi walked in on them. (Which reminds me; you may want to keep all the character's names in the same langauge. Choose either the English or Japanese. I don't really mind if it's only a minor character(here, Jonouchi), but I have seen it requested in reviews before.) I'm done now.
| Reviewed By: Kokuryu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, this was a very enjoyable story to read, mainly because it was yuri. Honestly, there's more than enough yaoi to go around and yet there's barely any yuri. Granted, it's because there are only four female characters in the show that are old enough to have sex, but a lot can be done with those four. Although Anzu/Shizuka isn't one of my favorite yuri pairings in Yu-Gi-Oh (that honor goes to Mai/Shizuka), it was still a very enjoyable story. You truly are great at writing and don't let anyone get you down just because you chose to write yuri. There is no such thing as a bad subject to write about; just talentless hacks who can't write to save their lives. And yes, I do agree that if you're going to respond to anything on the Internet, you should try to sound like an intelligent person instead. Write on!
| Reviewed By: Black-Butterfly On: March 09, 2005 01:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job. ^_^ As both a yaoi/yuri fan, and a lover of literature, I honestly enjoyed reading this, very much so...and yes, I agree, the reviews filled with "AOL speak" suck. "OMGZ! THAT TOTALLY SUUUUCKED! LOLZ!!!!!!" Eww...Any way, this was wonderful. Thanks for sharing it.
| Reviewed By: hoboken On: March 08, 2005 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. Cant think of anything else. If yoou go on Gaia Online, my username is hoboken
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: djs8310 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is...Wow...You're good at this. I'm an avid fan of YAOI and YURI, and trust me, this is one of the best YURI fanfics I've read here...Great job. djs8310 aka Neutral Love
| Reviewed By: Kamikaze Mitsukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Very nice. Of course, I haven't found a fic of Anzu/Shizuka to convert me to liking it, but I guess this helped. You should write more yuri.
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