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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to really really really need to update soon. Please, you just can't leave us hanging like that. So, please please please update!
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 19, 2005 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I should review all three chapters... Tsk. Shame on me... Aww... Poor Hiei... I want to hug him... and smack that Yoma guy... But I'll have to settle for finding my Hiei keychain and stroking its plasticy rubbery hair lovingly as I do every day when he gets assaulted by the boy I sit with at lunch... Anyways, more on-topic... Update more soonlier than you did last time, cuz I wanna know what's up with those eyes that were floating around in the last chapter...
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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: July 01, 2005 22:19 CDT
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I don't know why do you find it so funny? I still really love this fic though I'm scared Kurama's going to turn out to be worst than Yoma (an almost impossible goal at the moment). I really love this the way it shows Hiei to still be strong but admit hey (in this fic) he's human. You're doing a great job I don't see why sexual scenes matter. I like the flow as it is now.
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:44 CDT
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Nice chapter. What's up with Kurama, anyways? Poor little Hiei having nightmares... That would suck. And I can see why you think that 'casual sex' thing is funny... I chuckled when I read that line. :D I think I actually read something like that before.
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: June 28, 2005 20:49 CDT
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Jeesh. Don't get yourself down. These chapters aren't bad. And I'm not just saying that. And Hiei being OOC makes him cute... well, cute-ER, being as I already think he's adorable. XD ~Until the next chapter! Ja mata!
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: June 28, 2005 13:45 CDT
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Lol... no, my brain seizure was not a serious mental thing. I'd just got back from vacation and had a whole crapload of emails and people talking to me on MSN and updates to read and things to do and my brain was going, "BLAH!" ...I have a limit to how many things I can do at one time... Anyways... Poor Hiei. *sniffle* I feel bad for him... I like the story, as I said before. Update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: June 23, 2005 22:04 CDT
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Your chapters aren't lame. I like this story. I'm having a serious brain seizure right now or I'd be all gushy and encouraging, but I don't think I can do that at the current state of mind. ~SJ
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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: June 22, 2005 22:17 CDT
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Your chapters aren't lame. I like this story a lot. Most people do this kind of story I'm not going to lie to you about it. However you actually take your time and write it out well. Most people rush it and make everyone OOC and just screw it up. I am a bit confused about Yusuke but that's good confusion leads to me continuing to read your story. I will remember to consider this chapter as something very bad. (sorry that amused me no offense! please don't be offended! I'm sorry!) Don't worry if you don't want to write a scene imagination works well. You ended it well and it didn't seem like a loose thread to me. I enjoy the way you write and they way you view and project the characters. I hope you'll continue and I hope you enjoy your writing. I'd do a little thumbs up thing but mm.org wont' let me. dangit. I like my thumbs up thingy. even if it is lame. bah a plague on non-page updating thingy that mm.org does. You are doing wonderful work. I'll look for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Meigetsu On: June 06, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Then? Whore is the continuation?
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. it's getting really good. poor Hiei. such an evil father. update soon, please.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bwlj ( bookwormloverjen ) cant log in On: April 07, 2005 12:32 CDT
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this is pretty cool for an AU plz update soon
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Title: *nods*
Reviewed By: Heather13 On: April 05, 2005 18:57 CDT
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Awesome Jul. Make some more, the plot is thickening and thickening, UPDATE!!!!!!! *begs* ~Heather
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! it's getting really good. poor Hiei. can't wait to find out waht happens next!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good chapter. poor Hiei. it's getting really good. can't wait for an update!
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