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| "There's No Such Thing As Luck" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kuranajnet4iyujekjy On: May 26, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic! ^-^ It was hilarious, ESPECIALLY what you did with chaos. The part about the Professor and Assistant Scott bored me a little, but chaos' and Albedo's scenes were just so damn funny. Your grammar is pretty good, except that you keep misspelling "Durandal," but it wasn't that much of a bother. Please write more sometime!
| Reviewed By: AmethystGleam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
....This....truely amazes me. No, seriously. O_O NINJA EVIL TOUCH! Who would've thought Allen could be such an.. amazing rapper. I mean, I don't even like rap, but I like Allen's rapping! ..is there some brainwash factor in there? quick, have chaos NINJA EVIL TOUCH me before I buy Allen's CD! XD *hem* Keep up the good work. This is a very amusing and enjoyable fic. ^^
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