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Reviewed By: DK_Joy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's so kawaii! Please keep going!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:08 CST
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oooooh this might prove to be interesting...for one, what's to say the fox is going to let them go at all? I mean, I wouldn't! lol....I just wonder what's going to happen since Heero doesn't know, and probably isn't going to find out until it's too late, that Duo let himself get captured so that he could rescue Heero. Heero's going to be the bone-headed guy that we all love and try to rescue Duo, isn't he? Isn't he!?!?! *glares at you for not telling me*...*puts an innocent face back on* Update soon? Thanks ^-^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:25 CST
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Update soon! Duo doesn't seem like he wants to be tamed at all. How is Heero going to make friend with him? Are they going to fall in love and find a way around the bond thing? OR is Duo going to stay the slave?
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 10:35 CST
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OOoooo!! This very interesting so far! I think your characterizations are very good. Love the plot so far, and can\'t wait to read more! Update soon! ~Wanders off to wait for update~
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Title: lolly sister
Reviewed By: wizard101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:46 CST
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This chapter was really good. Thanks for the quick update.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:30 CST
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btw...ignore the randomness of my review...I'm on coffee! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:28 CST
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Duo and Wufei have a truce! lalalalalalala *dances around singing and throws random flowers in every direction* *realizes what she's doing and stops* Oops...sorry? *coughs* Okay onto the serious reviewing...interesting chapter, as always (I really do enjoy this fanfic. I squealed when I saw that you had updated). I think that maybe sending Wufei with Duo wasn't the smartest thing that Treize has done this fanfic but I'm starting to get the impression that Treize isn't that great of a father anyways. I mean, he didn't want Heero to get the throne at all and sent Zechs out to make sure that he didn't (though that did sorta fail). So Treize sending Wufei to 'keep an eye on Duo' wasn't that unexpected. I wonder what the fox is going to plan on asking Duo to do. I mean, he can do almost anything as long as it doesn't require sex...you gotta lot of things left besides that! Then you have Wufei whose indebted to Duo now because Duo 'saved his life'. That should be interesting to see. I mean, it basically means that until Wufei saves Duo's life, Wufei can't hurt him. *evil grin* Knowing poor Heero's luck, Quatre will be trying to do something nice and then Duo will come in and attack him! *shakes her head* (not that it won't be funny!) and then poor Heero will be stuck in the middle of it all! ^____^ Update soon *huggles you* I can't wait to see the next chapter *throws more flowers and then runs away*
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Title: Fun story. Needs a beta
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're off to a good start (I'm in ch. 2) Your writing style is lively and you move the story along well, without endless boring description. But the hilarious spelling errors are really distracting. You use 'curtain' for 'certain', 'thrown' for 'throne' (makes me think they're sitting in a catapult, ready to be launched LOL) and 'parsley' for 'partially'. Don't depend on a spelling checker to catch these. They're spelled right; they're just the wrong words.
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Reviewed By: wizard101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 12:50 CST
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It is getting pretty interesting. Will Duo and Quatre get along?
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Title: Review Part 2
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:36 CST
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We've already established that Duo's kind of a wimp when it comes to dealing with mysticals. So I don't know what anyone thinks he's going to do! I mean, seriously. I can't wait to see what Duo's powers are going to be though. I think that that might be cool ^-^ Wow, this is a long review. I've had to post it in two parts. Oh well, whatever. Hopefully you don't get confused! *huggles you for using my name in the chapter summary top of the page thing!* Update soon, I'll be looking forward to seeing what crazy things Duo plans on doing to get Heero back *snickers* ~KIM~
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Title: Review Part 1
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:34 CST
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Yeah! It's me again...okay this story is definitely starting to grab my attention (more so than it already did) So Duo's gotta go and find Heero and get him back to the Treize in one peice otherwise he dies, huh? Man my english teacher would love this! LoL...he's be like 'this is the perfect example of a hero's quest. the guy was just walking along and then BAM! his life changes drastically and then BAM! if he doesn't do something he's going to DIE!'...i like my english teacher ^-^ Okay, back to the serous reveiwing. I don't see why Heero didn't call out for someone. I mean he had enough time to figure out that he was being kidnapped and look at Quatre and ask who Quatre was and he didn't call out for someone??? Like Duo prehaps...*shakes her head at Heero, hits him in the head and calls HIM the baka* What an idiot! Anyways, Heero fell in love with Duo kinda fast..but I guess that's okay. So long as Duo doesn't fall in love that fast too (we discussed the reason for that in my last review so lets not do that again lolol) Anyways I wonder what Quatre expects to happen by him kidnapping Heero. I mean, does he think that Treize will give up the idea of his daughter marrying Trowa so that he can get Heero back? And if so, then I think that that plan is ruined with the whole Duo coming after Heero. Finally, what exactly is Duo going to do to get Heero back?
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 07:55 CST
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Well it's obviously going to take a long time for Duo to like Heero, or even to trust him. I just hope that Duo doesn't try to attack Heero so that he can leave him. What I would find really amusing though, *hint hint nod nod* is if Duo attacked Heero and then felt the pain that Heero did....that would be interesting...you know, to add to the pain that Duo feels when he disobeys Heero, he would have to deal with the pain that he causes Heero himself. That would suck! LOL...I think that this is a good fanfic and that you should keep it up because, hell you have everything taken into account and though I'm going to eventually be frusterated when it's obvious that Heero likes Duo and Duo won't cooperate properly, I still think that this is going to be a good fanfic. And I agree with Lolly Sister...I'm definitely glad that you decided to remember that slaves, especially ones that are involuntarily brought into it, aren't going to like the master very much. I just can't wait to see how you get Duo to come around eventually. That's going to be hard. Update soon...I'll be looking forward to it ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this so far, so please keep going! Duo as a slave is done often, but I love it when he resists.
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Reviewed By: lolly sister [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 11:02 CST
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I usually find slave/master fics to be awful and unrealistic. How can a slave be expected to eventually love a master? There is no equality. But you are taking that into account, somewhat, and so far I have nothing to complain about. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 08:24 CST
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Hey, this looks like it might be an interesting fanfic ^-^ I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder whether or not it will count that Heero captured Duo..and why on earth did Treize not want Heero to get the thrown? That's kinda odd, isn't it? Anyways update soon, i'll be watching for it! ~KIM~
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