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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:05 CST
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You must continue! Please put up another chapter.*pouts* Pwease?
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 11:16 CST
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Hey! I wanted to say sorry about my last review. That was for another story. *feels really dumb* I love your story so far and love the way you portray the characters. I love it so far and look forward to your future chaps. And I'll try to review on the right story for now on. *grins sheepishly* I still wish that Duo could've killed King Barton though. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:06 CST
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*huggles you* Don't worry I'll review this story forever...wel until it ends because after that, there's really no point. lol. And this chapter wasn't really as sappy as you made it sound it was going to be...I liked it!!!! ^-^ Can't wait to see what's going to happen next...*pulls up a chair and grabs a book and reads while she's waiting* Update Soon!!! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 13:42 CST
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Relena is such a bitch! Beating Duo is one thing, but trying to get Quatre too. Omae o korosu, puta!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 09:26 CST
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your welcome to ethereal for reviewing....*snickers* oh yeah!!!!! sorry it took so long for me to review...(like a whole day..okay i thought it was longer...sue me). Umm this chapter was a little rushed in the beginning but it came together well in the end ^-^ Actually it wasn't that rushed in the beginning for the way you wrote it, I just would have liked it better if it had taken a little longer for heero and duo to get to each other. *shrugs* oh well, it still was nice...the kiss at the end was so cute ^_^ *swoons* I can't wait to see what happens next and so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter ^-^ So update soon and I'll continue reviewing each chapter 'cause I love this fanfic ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's so kawaii! Please keep going!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 16:08 CST
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oooooh this might prove to be interesting...for one, what's to say the fox is going to let them go at all? I mean, I wouldn't! lol....I just wonder what's going to happen since Heero doesn't know, and probably isn't going to find out until it's too late, that Duo let himself get captured so that he could rescue Heero. Heero's going to be the bone-headed guy that we all love and try to rescue Duo, isn't he? Isn't he!?!?! *glares at you for not telling me*...*puts an innocent face back on* Update soon? Thanks ^-^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:25 CST
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Update soon! Duo doesn't seem like he wants to be tamed at all. How is Heero going to make friend with him? Are they going to fall in love and find a way around the bond thing? OR is Duo going to stay the slave?
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 10:35 CST
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OOoooo!! This very interesting so far! I think your characterizations are very good. Love the plot so far, and can\'t wait to read more! Update soon! ~Wanders off to wait for update~
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Title: lolly sister
Reviewed By: wizard101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:46 CST
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This chapter was really good. Thanks for the quick update.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:30 CST
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btw...ignore the randomness of my review...I'm on coffee! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:28 CST
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Duo and Wufei have a truce! lalalalalalala *dances around singing and throws random flowers in every direction* *realizes what she's doing and stops* Oops...sorry? *coughs* Okay onto the serious reviewing...interesting chapter, as always (I really do enjoy this fanfic. I squealed when I saw that you had updated). I think that maybe sending Wufei with Duo wasn't the smartest thing that Treize has done this fanfic but I'm starting to get the impression that Treize isn't that great of a father anyways. I mean, he didn't want Heero to get the throne at all and sent Zechs out to make sure that he didn't (though that did sorta fail). So Treize sending Wufei to 'keep an eye on Duo' wasn't that unexpected. I wonder what the fox is going to plan on asking Duo to do. I mean, he can do almost anything as long as it doesn't require sex...you gotta lot of things left besides that! Then you have Wufei whose indebted to Duo now because Duo 'saved his life'. That should be interesting to see. I mean, it basically means that until Wufei saves Duo's life, Wufei can't hurt him. *evil grin* Knowing poor Heero's luck, Quatre will be trying to do something nice and then Duo will come in and attack him! *shakes her head* (not that it won't be funny!) and then poor Heero will be stuck in the middle of it all! ^____^ Update soon *huggles you* I can't wait to see the next chapter *throws more flowers and then runs away*
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Title: Fun story. Needs a beta
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're off to a good start (I'm in ch. 2) Your writing style is lively and you move the story along well, without endless boring description. But the hilarious spelling errors are really distracting. You use 'curtain' for 'certain', 'thrown' for 'throne' (makes me think they're sitting in a catapult, ready to be launched LOL) and 'parsley' for 'partially'. Don't depend on a spelling checker to catch these. They're spelled right; they're just the wrong words.
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Reviewed By: wizard101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 12:50 CST
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It is getting pretty interesting. Will Duo and Quatre get along?
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Title: Review Part 2
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:36 CST
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We've already established that Duo's kind of a wimp when it comes to dealing with mysticals. So I don't know what anyone thinks he's going to do! I mean, seriously. I can't wait to see what Duo's powers are going to be though. I think that that might be cool ^-^ Wow, this is a long review. I've had to post it in two parts. Oh well, whatever. Hopefully you don't get confused! *huggles you for using my name in the chapter summary top of the page thing!* Update soon, I'll be looking forward to seeing what crazy things Duo plans on doing to get Heero back *snickers* ~KIM~
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