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| "Of Men and Myth" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Title: Review Part 1
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:34 CST
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Yeah! It's me again...okay this story is definitely starting to grab my attention (more so than it already did) So Duo's gotta go and find Heero and get him back to the Treize in one peice otherwise he dies, huh? Man my english teacher would love this! LoL...he's be like 'this is the perfect example of a hero's quest. the guy was just walking along and then BAM! his life changes drastically and then BAM! if he doesn't do something he's going to DIE!'...i like my english teacher ^-^ Okay, back to the serous reveiwing. I don't see why Heero didn't call out for someone. I mean he had enough time to figure out that he was being kidnapped and look at Quatre and ask who Quatre was and he didn't call out for someone??? Like Duo prehaps...*shakes her head at Heero, hits him in the head and calls HIM the baka* What an idiot! Anyways, Heero fell in love with Duo kinda fast..but I guess that's okay. So long as Duo doesn't fall in love that fast too (we discussed the reason for that in my last review so lets not do that again lolol) Anyways I wonder what Quatre expects to happen by him kidnapping Heero. I mean, does he think that Treize will give up the idea of his daughter marrying Trowa so that he can get Heero back? And if so, then I think that that plan is ruined with the whole Duo coming after Heero. Finally, what exactly is Duo going to do to get Heero back?
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 07:55 CST
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Well it's obviously going to take a long time for Duo to like Heero, or even to trust him. I just hope that Duo doesn't try to attack Heero so that he can leave him. What I would find really amusing though, *hint hint nod nod* is if Duo attacked Heero and then felt the pain that Heero did....that would be interesting...you know, to add to the pain that Duo feels when he disobeys Heero, he would have to deal with the pain that he causes Heero himself. That would suck! LOL...I think that this is a good fanfic and that you should keep it up because, hell you have everything taken into account and though I'm going to eventually be frusterated when it's obvious that Heero likes Duo and Duo won't cooperate properly, I still think that this is going to be a good fanfic. And I agree with Lolly Sister...I'm definitely glad that you decided to remember that slaves, especially ones that are involuntarily brought into it, aren't going to like the master very much. I just can't wait to see how you get Duo to come around eventually. That's going to be hard. Update soon...I'll be looking forward to it ~KIM~
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this so far, so please keep going! Duo as a slave is done often, but I love it when he resists.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: lolly sister [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 11:02 CST
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I usually find slave/master fics to be awful and unrealistic. How can a slave be expected to eventually love a master? There is no equality. But you are taking that into account, somewhat, and so far I have nothing to complain about. Please update soon.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 08:24 CST
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Hey, this looks like it might be an interesting fanfic ^-^ I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder whether or not it will count that Heero captured Duo..and why on earth did Treize not want Heero to get the thrown? That's kinda odd, isn't it? Anyways update soon, i'll be watching for it! ~KIM~
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