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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 18, 2005 00:21 CDT
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great story.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 17, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, and I'm only chapter 5! Those sequences at the end with Kikyo remind me of the dream levels in Max Payne (computer game).
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX(Not logged in) On: June 28, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome I love it like always lol I bet your getting tired of hearing me say that..lol well I will come up with something more..original...in my next review! Ok well update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good...lol I wasn't expecting that to happen..ok well UpDaTe AsAp PlEaSe!!!!
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry I haven't admitted a review with the last chapter, but I've bin so busty that I really didn't had the time for it (I had to catch my train to work). But I loved it as much as this chapter! HOORAY KAGOME AND INUYASHA HAD- errr well you get my point. I think you put the lemon out very well, just nice enough to read and not too much useless details, very nicely done *writes with a red marker a big A on the chapter* It's to bad for Kikyo she is really brain dead and her spirit can't and rest (what does that girl has with dying and being a restless spirit whaha) but for the best since Kagome and Inu Yasha found each other. I also think you let Inu Yasha's past en Kagome's nicely flow into each others, with Inu Yasha playing Kagome savior. I'm so sorry I would write a longer review for you since I forgot to do it at the last chapter but I really gott2go! Please update soon (and you other fic's as well!) Big K!$$ and lots of luv to u girl! ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!!Cant wait to see what happens next like always..well Gotta go bye!!
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Reviewed By: Dave Man not signed in On: June 06, 2005 13:54 CDT
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Great plot line but I have a question. Will this end up being an Kag/Inu Fic or a Kik/Inu fic?
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (To Lazy To Login) On: June 05, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Hooray I got my Rin / Sesshoumaru part ^^ *sequels* Luv ya for it! Poor Kikyo and Inu Yasha, both want to reach each other so badly but can't. But then again: poor Inu Yasha and Kagome for they aren't aloud to get together and simply can't. Awh it's like this big soap serie and I'm totally loving it ^^ I have TV soaps but I love treading fanfiction haha I sure hope everything will come fine with Inu Yasha again 'cause I'm thinking he's going into a little dip or something. You made your story really unpredictable and that keeps people reading, since Inu Yasha loves Kikyo, but he has feelings for Kagome … Kikyo is in a coma and he might me never able to reach her again, and Kagome and him … well he's married for a start and she's the nurse. So he's a bit stuck I think. But I believe I'm babbling crap again (seriously I just keep talking and talking sometimes … like now *slaps herself* I gotta stop it!) Update soon please or I'll come looking for ya and force ya! Bubai, big K!$$ and lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: to lazy to log in lol just take out the eight..
Reviewed By: xxdemonic_princessxx8 On: June 05, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that u updated! another great chapter!well update as soon as you can! and until then Ja Ne! _Kalienna_
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it like always..so does this chapter mean that Inuyasha doesn't love Kagome and that he was just confused or that he cares about her alot and doesnt know what he is feeling..?well very good update sooon!!!
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 18:51 CDT
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Sorry, I forgot to say that I absolutely like the parts about kikyo (of course I love the Kag/Inu parts more :P) but like you said: no one knows what going on in the head of people who lie in coma. And this way your bringing her in the story on a nice way! And can there be a lil bit Rin? Sesshy in the next chap plz *pulls big watery puppy eyes*
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Title: I LUV THIS FIC!!!!!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay giving you a 10 for every factor isn't very original I know, but would you rather have a different grade for your work haha! No really you deserve it, your fic is so original, and you put it all down so good! You gave every character a nice roll and not the standard stuff, I really like it. You're doing an absolutely great job! I was so caught up in reading this story that I kept reading till half past 2 in the morning, that's until my dad pulled my internet out haha, so I had to read the last 2 chapters later. Please update so soon, your DEINALY going in my fav. Author. I know this is the standard review to give, but there are only a hand full of fanfic's put down this good, so you really deserve more review on this one! Don't get me wrong people who also wrote fanfic's (that includes me) I'm not trying to insult other writers. People on MM.org don't review much, but your writing a great fic (just look at the numbers of people who red it ^^) please update soon, must know what happens next! Bubai, K!$$ and lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh I just love your story! I had to review again..hope you dont mind..lol!!Well plz plz plz plz plz update ASAP!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 16, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Im to tired to write anything else. So I'll leave it here.
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!I LOVE THIS STORY!!Its soo good!lol I know I have said that like a million times but it is!!and I just wanted to let you know that even if I dont review to a chapter I still read it it's just hard to do that with all the computer problems that have been haggleing me lately..Ok well about the story now..I wonder does that mean that Kikyo will wake up soon? hmm I kinda hope she does so then Inuyasha and Kagome can be together faster lol ^_^ well love it keep up the awesome Work
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