| "The XX Factor" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:35 CST
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So adorable! I love it, it's great and hilarious! So sweet, so cute! ARGH! This is hot!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fricken cute! And wouldn't it be a little less than nine months, hasn't at least a week or two passed now? (Sorry, I'm kinda picky about that...being a woman and all...) Counting down...Tee hee... I can't wait for your update! Go you!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 12, 2005 21:25 CST
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Um . . . point 3 was the only thing I was confused on. Thank you for that, and I'll just go crawling back into the shadows now. Sorry! ^^;; This is still wonderful . . . Yep, I have no constructive criticism to offer. *Slinks away into the shadows.*
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 19:27 CST
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I love the food cravings the best! I think they're so creative and weird and wonderful! You're so great at this story, never mind how research like it sounds. Good job with the chatper!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Pregnant'and'Joey-puppy' do NOT mix, but somehow you have managed to and we're all proud of you...[{Some-Rabid-Seto-Kaiba-Fan-Girl: I feel sorry for Seto-sama!! :'(}] UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: WannabeKoushiro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is so fun! I just love everything you're putting Joey through so far. I especially love all the beatings Seto is getting. I normally don't like him, and I usually dislike this couple, but this is a very unique situation written in a humorous and charming way.
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Title: So . . . very . . . evil . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 11, 2005 21:55 CST
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You evil, hentai, wicked, person you! Do you have any idea how much I love you for your writing naughtiness? O.o Wait . . . never mind, that wasn't grammarly possible. But I still love your writings. So you're going to continue this, yes? Then I must read, and laugh at the fury of a hormonal-female-Jou. The more he beats on Kaiba, the more I laugh. Now you did clear up the whole bleeding thing, but then you promptly dug yourself back into a hole. Now if you have found/do find anything to the contrary, feel free to dismiss the following: Once a woman starts bleeding, she can't get pregnant for that cycle (maybe in the first few hours, but come on, the egg is getting flushed too). You insinuated that Jou & Seto have only had sex once. Given that sperm can only live 24 hours max, and Jou had been bleeding for a few days (he was still bleeding when they made love, right?), I find it hard that he got pregnant that time. But if I'm wrong, then could you spell it out for me, pretty please? I'm sorry for not understanding what happened. ;_;
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 17:58 CST
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Love it! It's awsome!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super uber cruel person indeed! Geeze...I can't believe you wrote that, (but deep down inside, I'm giggling maddly (on the outside as well) and I'm glad you did!) I can't wait for you to UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had SO better update this fic soon!! It's so funny^^ and I want to see what happens to Joey!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 10, 2005 03:43 CST
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You're evil, you updated as I posted my review for chapters 1&2. I read chp 2, and 3 wasn't even up yet. Refresh my inbox, and there it is. Evil I say, evil. And that's why I love you, which is very bad. But what can you do about bad habits? *Reads part 3* Yes . . . . highly cruel. And how did that happen if he was still bleeding? *CLicks in that he stayed for a month or so, so they probably had "fun" when he wasn't bleeding* . . Nevermind . . . I liked this, but I still feel for Jou. And the image of Kaiba being knock on his ass by a pissed off female Jou shall remain in my heart always.
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Title: O________O!!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 10, 2005 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You . . . are so evil . . . I wouldn't even put the boys through menstruation, and I break alllll my character's souls at least once during their lifetime. That is just . . . . my gods . . . just so . . . I'm still going to read this, but I beg you on behalf of Jou, don't give him any medical conditions that complicate the bleeding. I speak from knowing, complications are not fun, and this is compared too something that really feels like hell on earth. Gods. . . someone convince him to use a tampon, he'll be less homicidal, I know I am. And this is a guy, feeling That for the first time, when most women hate that feeling Every time. Oh gods. . . I just feel so bad for him. I was right there going fetal position with him. Just. . . end the pain soon, please? Show him mercy, show him mercy . . .
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Reviewed By: Sisco (too lazy to log in) On: March 09, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDD!!!!! Oh this is so frickin great! I want to read more. I hope you update real soon!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Marik and Bakura would do something like that...and the result would be something along the lines of a sex change. This is going to be intersting. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Motje (to lazy to log in) On: March 09, 2005 11:58 CST
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Poor Joey. Nice one, hadn't seen it coming that he would become a girl.
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