| "The XX Factor" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooooooo sweet. and I think Joey would be a good mommy, I am writing a story where Yami and Yugi have a daughter that looks alot like Yami. Great story. Keep writing
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: March 21, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cackles sinsterly* Pls update this! And, Joey, the best revenge on Bakura and Marik would be to turn one of them into a girl and use fertility potion, and instant pregnancy! *evil laughter* As for Yugi, pls get him pregnant!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fricken cute! I'm so amazed at how adorable this is! KAWAII! Update soon, this is awsome! (Get Yugi pregnant, just because...)
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Title: Heya!
Reviewed By: Sisco [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe!! This is such a cool fic! I can't wait to read more...and more! o.o XD Joey is going to be so cute as a mommy! ^o^
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:35 CST
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So adorable! I love it, it's great and hilarious! So sweet, so cute! ARGH! This is hot!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fricken cute! And wouldn't it be a little less than nine months, hasn't at least a week or two passed now? (Sorry, I'm kinda picky about that...being a woman and all...) Counting down...Tee hee... I can't wait for your update! Go you!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 12, 2005 21:25 CST
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Um . . . point 3 was the only thing I was confused on. Thank you for that, and I'll just go crawling back into the shadows now. Sorry! ^^;; This is still wonderful . . . Yep, I have no constructive criticism to offer. *Slinks away into the shadows.*
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 19:27 CST
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I love the food cravings the best! I think they're so creative and weird and wonderful! You're so great at this story, never mind how research like it sounds. Good job with the chatper!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Pregnant'and'Joey-puppy' do NOT mix, but somehow you have managed to and we're all proud of you...[{Some-Rabid-Seto-Kaiba-Fan-Girl: I feel sorry for Seto-sama!! :'(}] UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: WannabeKoushiro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is so fun! I just love everything you're putting Joey through so far. I especially love all the beatings Seto is getting. I normally don't like him, and I usually dislike this couple, but this is a very unique situation written in a humorous and charming way.
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Title: So . . . very . . . evil . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 11, 2005 21:55 CST
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You evil, hentai, wicked, person you! Do you have any idea how much I love you for your writing naughtiness? O.o Wait . . . never mind, that wasn't grammarly possible. But I still love your writings. So you're going to continue this, yes? Then I must read, and laugh at the fury of a hormonal-female-Jou. The more he beats on Kaiba, the more I laugh. Now you did clear up the whole bleeding thing, but then you promptly dug yourself back into a hole. Now if you have found/do find anything to the contrary, feel free to dismiss the following: Once a woman starts bleeding, she can't get pregnant for that cycle (maybe in the first few hours, but come on, the egg is getting flushed too). You insinuated that Jou & Seto have only had sex once. Given that sperm can only live 24 hours max, and Jou had been bleeding for a few days (he was still bleeding when they made love, right?), I find it hard that he got pregnant that time. But if I'm wrong, then could you spell it out for me, pretty please? I'm sorry for not understanding what happened. ;_;
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it! It's awsome!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super uber cruel person indeed! Geeze...I can't believe you wrote that, (but deep down inside, I'm giggling maddly (on the outside as well) and I'm glad you did!) I can't wait for you to UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had SO better update this fic soon!! It's so funny^^ and I want to see what happens to Joey!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 10, 2005 03:43 CST
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You're evil, you updated as I posted my review for chapters 1&2. I read chp 2, and 3 wasn't even up yet. Refresh my inbox, and there it is. Evil I say, evil. And that's why I love you, which is very bad. But what can you do about bad habits? *Reads part 3* Yes . . . . highly cruel. And how did that happen if he was still bleeding? *CLicks in that he stayed for a month or so, so they probably had "fun" when he wasn't bleeding* . . Nevermind . . . I liked this, but I still feel for Jou. And the image of Kaiba being knock on his ass by a pissed off female Jou shall remain in my heart always.
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