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| "The XX Factor" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: O________O!!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 10, 2005 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You . . . are so evil . . . I wouldn't even put the boys through menstruation, and I break alllll my character's souls at least once during their lifetime. That is just . . . . my gods . . . just so . . . I'm still going to read this, but I beg you on behalf of Jou, don't give him any medical conditions that complicate the bleeding. I speak from knowing, complications are not fun, and this is compared too something that really feels like hell on earth. Gods. . . someone convince him to use a tampon, he'll be less homicidal, I know I am. And this is a guy, feeling That for the first time, when most women hate that feeling Every time. Oh gods. . . I just feel so bad for him. I was right there going fetal position with him. Just. . . end the pain soon, please? Show him mercy, show him mercy . . .
| Reviewed By: Sisco (too lazy to log in) On: March 09, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDD!!!!! Oh this is so frickin great! I want to read more. I hope you update real soon!
| Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Marik and Bakura would do something like that...and the result would be something along the lines of a sex change. This is going to be intersting. I can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: Motje (to lazy to log in) On: March 09, 2005 11:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Joey. Nice one, hadn't seen it coming that he would become a girl.
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