| "The Last Fight, The First Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i say screw the people that dont review, and finnish the story case you want to. and, if you want me too, i can send this to some of my friends, and they can review as well. ^_^ just e-mail me.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh, its a great story, but we need updates. please update soon.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn good story. please update soon. ^_^
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Title: a review
Reviewed By: Mangalover132 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good overall not much mistakes.
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Title: Um, a review.
Reviewed By: *Lillie* [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is good. You're good at describing the action, and the dialogue is fine, too. I saw a few minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation, but it's nothing that can't be easily fixed. I hope you continue this, because it looks promising. The overall rating, I'm sure, will be higher once it is fully finished. I think all the other ratings are self-explanatory. But yeah, overall, good stuff. Don't be so hard on yourself.
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