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| "A single night, a change in live" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mely On: March 15, 2005 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intersting? Of course this story is interesting. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read about how this whole story happened.
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a really interesting story so far, but I'm afraid I don't quite understand what is going on here. Are they on another planet or something? What's all this about Goku and Bulma? And what about Vegeta and Bulma's 'story'? Yeah, and I think you need to use a spell check or something cause there was a lot of mistakes in there, but other then that I really enjoyed this, please update soon!!
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