Reviewed By: baka_kitsune(not logged in) On: April 20, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That's deep. You made a few mistakes. Mostly using possessives when you shouldn't. Like 'your' instead of 'you're' and 'their' instead of 'they're'. Other than that, I really liked it.
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