| "Pretend, No More" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH FUCK!!! THIS WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME! I SO FUCKING LOVE LEMONS!!!! hehe sorry I'm kinda a hentai anyway PLEASE make another Kagome/Kurama/Youko I just SO FUCKING LOVE THOSE TWO (three if you consider adding Youko) BEING PAIRED! And I ABSOLUTELY FUCKING LOVE TI IF THERE'S LEMON!!!!! Its SO adds the FUCKING AWESOMNESS!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good story and i wish it was longer
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww
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Title: LadyKenyanna
Reviewed By: LadyKenyanna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was the CLEAN verison? lol I liked it.
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really kawaii! I loved how you had Rin and Shippo in there too. The lemon was great and it was cool how you got Kagome and Kurama together. Keep writing! ~DA
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: September 11, 2005 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've never seen Yu Yu Hakusho, and I'm a strong supporter of Inu/Kags. But despite my not knowing who Kurama is, I have to say, nice job. I loved the lemon.
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Reviewed By: ROCKNROLL7806- On: April 14, 2005 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS SO CUTE! OMG I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not logged in) On: April 05, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I loved it! I usually only like Inuyasha/Kagome parings but this was great! keep up the good work! ^___^
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Reviewed By: wynter89 (mm) On: March 10, 2005 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
nicely done. very creative and interesting, loved the way you put a plot to the fict. it was funny at points and had some other good qualities to it that makes it a good fict. love to read more of your ficts. (hope that there are more) loved it and hope you continue to write. good luck may kami-sama be with you.
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Reviewed By: LilChic24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo dat was damn steaming and... hoootttt ;) lol! anyways i would give ur story a big fat 10!! :D :D i hope u make other stories as good as this one!!
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Title: Pretend, No More
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Anne_WritingAngel(not logged in at the moment) On: March 08, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done!!!! sorri i'm not logged in ^^ but i throughly enjoyed your story!!!!! K&K all the way!!!!
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