| "For the love of pikachu" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: bballmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you suck and should never write another story
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Reviewed By: A Crazy Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so now I know I won't read anything else written by you. It was so sick. I can see you hate Pokémon, but that doesn't give you the right to be so unrespectful about something so many people love. You should have put a warning at the summary, "not suitable for pokémon lovers", or something like that. You obviously noticed this resulted something insulting for many readers (myself included), and I guess you never thought of using at least this symbol *** when saying something bad. About you being 10 years old when writing it (if it's true), I really think you had too many dirty thoughts, maybe you were just trying to show others you knew what you were talking about, but sincerely, your ideas were all wrong. If you want to make an other story similar to this one, you should make up the characters, so we (the fans) don't have to feel sorry about Pikachu, Ash, Misty, Brock, or any other we can think of as an idol. Please, next time (if there's any) try to take my advice, and add some more plot to the story, as it was very short, and it didn't have a good description either. You should practice your writing skills. That's all I have to say, I think. Good bye.
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Title: sawa
Reviewed By: Sawa139 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell is wrong with u dude that is so wrong and you know it
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Title: U suck wang. A lot.
Reviewed By: One Who Hates Retards On: July 09, 2005 18:37 CDT
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.......I feel sad for you and your stupidness.
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Title: Sad....just sad...
Reviewed By: Some1onearth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you were ten years old when you wrote this...then...you really must have been introduced to some crazy stuff as a child...were you ever abused?....seriously....because that sounds like as if you were not only 10yrs old but also on some kind of drug that you just happened to miss out on during the creation of this ridiculous and sad....i don't even know what to call it....
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Title: OKAY PEOPLE
Reviewed By: TETE19(NOT LOGGED IN) On: May 15, 2005 11:58 CDT
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I WAS LIKE 10 YEARS OLD WHEN I WROTE THIS SO DON'T GET MAD.I ALWAYS HATED POKEMON, SO I HAD TO WRIE SOMETHING FUNNY ABOUT IT.BESIDES I WAS IN CLASS AND BORED, SO IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT FUCK YOU AND YOUR MAMA:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Uh, wow.
Reviewed By: Xingu On: May 14, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, wow. That was possibly the worst-written thing I have ever read... But I literally toppled my computer chair over reading it. Wow. That was horridly disturbing, and I am traumatized... But it made me laugh. *thumbs up* WHY DO YOU DO THIS SHIT, LEEROY? It's not my fault, guys, I am so stoned...
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Reviewed By: IantheKorean On: May 14, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEROY http://www.warcraftmovies.com/movieview.php?id=1666
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Title: that was stupid
Reviewed By: madmax21 On: May 07, 2005 13:46 CDT
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don't ever write again that was the stupidest shit i have ever read.......really REALLY STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: WTFUBastard?!?
Reviewed By: YO MAMA! On: May 04, 2005 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the FUCK? What the HELL was that? I sure hope Pikachu comes back from the dead and rapes your ASs off, dammit!
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Reviewed By: Miles Prower On: April 23, 2005 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that sucked. You wasted five minutes of my life. I would like them back now.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: the hotness On: April 20, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG THAT HAD TO BE THE CRAZIEST SHIT I HAVE EVER READ,LOL......IT WAS FUNNY BUT YOU SHOULD REALLY LEARN TO PUT "" THESE AROUND WHEN PEOPLE ARE TALKING CAUSE IT HARD TELL WHOS TALKIN AND WHO NOT STILL FUNNY......IN A CRAZY AS HELL SORT OF WAY LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL..........^_______^
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Reviewed By: Legolas Greenleaf72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit that was terrible, not to mention how bad your writing skills are.
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Title: Whatever
Reviewed By: ViR On: April 01, 2005 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
right, no comment. seriously this thing can get disturbing but ya, its hell of a kind, funny like shit man! X3 Just wondering, but is it REALLY possible to have sex between human and pokemon? I mean, most people think that pikachu (ash's) is male, but then I never say the penis!! Neither on the other pokemons!! Does that mean that they are all females? O.o How do pokemon give birth? Seriously, we need to research on that...XD Just being randomn and super bored. I'm super high right now..=P
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: the darkness On: March 16, 2005 12:43 CST
Comment/Review:
okay this is one of the funnest stories i've read in a long time, people take this to serious now a day it nice to see someone out there has a sense of humor as sick as it may bye lol:)!!!!
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: the darkness On: March 16, 2005 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
okay this is one of the funnest stories i've read in a long time, people take this to serious now a day it nice to see someone out there has a sense of humor as sick as it may bye lol:)!!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkseid II On: March 09, 2005 19:09 CST
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You're one sick puppy, TETE. Your parents should have strangled you at birth.
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Title: okayyyyyyyyy
Reviewed By: How high On: March 09, 2005 13:32 CST
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that was by far one of the scariest thigs i have ever read ::throws acid in his eyes:: ahhh that better now i can bare the look a that story ::looks:: nope i think im going to throw up god even acid wont get that sick image out of my mind PLEASE KILL NOW!!!! OH GOD THAT WAS SICK SICK pokemon are meant to catch you know the theme "gotta catch um all" not "gotta fuck um all" what where you thinking>>>>>
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Title: very funny lol
Reviewed By: make me laugh On: March 09, 2005 13:22 CST
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this is a very funny story i mean who would have ever thought ash actually would do that to pikachu lol that just to funny for words and if anyone tells you your sick their just mad cause they didn't think of that IT JUST A STORY PEOPLE!!!!!!! gods get a life it meant to be funny if it wasn't them TETE19 wouldnt have put comedy as one of her themes okay it sick but it is funny lol
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Title: ewwww
Reviewed By: just me On: March 09, 2005 13:14 CST
Comment/Review:
that nasty i'll never look at pokemon the same way ash and pikachu what where you thinking omg thats is sick he human and pikachus a animal(pokemon) come on thats just ewww ewww nasty very very nasty
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: crazygirl99 On: March 09, 2005 10:17 CST
Comment/Review:
that was scary poor pikachu i feel really be for him but it was kind of funny in a sick and twisted sort or way lol anyways that my review bye
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