| "Seduction of Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 - not logged in On: January 21, 2006 23:46 CST
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you make ua wait so long but it is worth it. I loved the last chapter and I think I know how he got in the room and if im right then i think that is cool that you are making sephiroth be able to do all the things that he can do in the game and or movie. Ill be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 10:22 CST
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(laughing) well, i must say that this is an amazingly funny chapter. not only did you manage to keep these incredibly sexy bishounen in character (and give them some rather amusing touches) but you've made them incredibly more desirable than they were before. how hard that is! you've got an amazing control of who these characters are and who you want them to be in your world, and i must say, i'm rather enjoying this story. please, keep up the good world, it's a great story, and i'm enjoying it thoroughly. i must say, that my favorite part in this chapter was this: "that the cuckoo clock has a butcher knife embedded in it." all the male posturing, all the hot references, all lost in this little spark of humor. at least we know that sephiroth means what he says, ne? hanyou enjoyed it and i look forward to the next chapter. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: puppet master n.s.i. On: January 20, 2006 16:10 CST
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hot. though I think their cocks are a bit to big. those would hurt
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Reviewed By: Sunnydelight On: January 09, 2006 23:19 CST
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This is too hot for words! It's been a long time. Please, please, please update.
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:19 CST
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Hawt! :::squeals::: you updated. now update again!LOL! that was so hawt. sephys pierced tongue going there.oooooos.i luv you! PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in On: November 11, 2005 12:52 CST
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Oh... oh... oh... thankyou. I've been waiting forever to see this. And Ironically, although I know what happened felt good, the part that turned me on so bad I had to make an example of my woman, was that Sessh had stripes... there. I rarely get that turned on, but I was... and now, I want Sesshomaru, for real. I wish he wasn't a damned cartoon. ::growls::
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Reviewed By: Puppet Master nsi On: November 11, 2005 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Hot! How come you didn't tell us Sesshoumaru's size,but you told us Sephiroth's in the last part?
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 22:30 CST
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it has been a mouth but you have finally updated but I have to say that chapter was worth the wait. I love all or your storeys so far. I cant wait till the next time you update.
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Reviewed By: tentacle lover On: November 10, 2005 21:14 CST
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well... (fanning self) let me tell you that this is fucking hot as hell! i can not believe how fucking hot this is! ohs... to have a silver haired bishie with a gold stud in his mouth to suck my so-not-there cock... hanyou is super jealous of sesshoumaru... (waving hand in front of face, fanning self) let me just say, congratulations. this story was fucking hot! i can use it to stay warm in the freezing temperatures i'm getting now. yay! now... onto the review. this is a great chapter. you've captured the mood and i loved the smut and let me say, when sesshy tucked sephy's hair behind his ear, i went, "aww! how cute!" this is a great story and i look forward to more from you! keep it up! i love this story. you're are awesome! hanyou-elf... who is now off to find somebody with a tongue-ring that wants to give hanyou a ride...
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Reviewed By: margyy On: November 04, 2005 02:30 CST
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me lov!!! PLEASEEEE update soooon!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 13:32 CDT
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HOT! OMG! :::drools::: this story is SO FREAKING AMAZING! i saw its up for best yaoi on the fiction group. i agree with that. i just found this when i realized that other name is you. ive been reading your other story. i luv you! you do evil cliffies on this story 2. (crys) LOL. PLZ UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome! I love it. PLEASE!!! update soon TT_TT
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Reviewed By: Dylan R. On: October 04, 2005 17:27 CDT
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Marry me! Sweetheart, once again, you've done it, I need to go take care of business. Wish Sessy was blowing my shaft like that. Marry me! Damn cliffhangers! Damn them! Update.
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Reviewed By: chibirin On: October 03, 2005 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i want to read more ill be checking back every few days
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Reviewed By: Nihilatrix On: September 27, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still loving this story and the absolutely lovely images it gives me...but AAAAARRGH THE CLIFFHANGER!!! Please, please, pretty please with whipped cream, hot fudge and a cherry on top put up the next chapter soon! ...I'm even saving some clean undies for after I read..:P
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