| "Seduction of Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: peaches 279102000 On: September 11, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic..plain and simple..please update
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Reviewed By: peachesncream On: September 06, 2005 20:30 CDT
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This was so sizzling.I had to change undies after reading this chapter.Sephiroth's nipple and tongue are pierced.Then Sesshoumaru blowing Sephiroth.That made me cream my jeans,thats my boyfriend's saying.My boyfriend read this to.He swears you're a male.Are you?We both love you!UPDATE SOON!PRETTY PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT LONG!
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Title: Oh to be a fly on the wall
Reviewed By: nihilatrix On: September 05, 2005 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gods the hotness! My favorite silver haired ambivalent characters...the only thing hotter than Sephiroth or Sesshoumaru seperate is the two of them making out like tigers together! Sex and violence and long white hair...Now I need a clean pair!
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Title: I need some cold water.
Reviewed By: Comfort_and_Joi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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These two are amazing ... Why can't I be the meat in their sandwich? *pouts* Another killer chapter ... looking forward for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!
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Reviewed By: Yay! On: September 03, 2005 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 04:18 CDT
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Dangerous, delicious, seductive... can I play too? :( lol. We can insert me in there, right? lol. I hate when people go over 10 inches with size. A.) It hurts, and B.)all men are different. I know in my fic they're all well endowed. But I see demons as being that way. Attractive ones, anyway, which is why there are more of them. Jakken is never getting laid, okay? lol! I see Miroku as the smallest with 7, and Sesshomaru is always the largest with 10. It's sad, I don't even fit the Sesshomaru bill there. I'm about an Inuyasha's size, but that's all I will say. people are looking at me strangely, lol.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to see an update! but, now i am even more "worked" up than the last chap. now i have to wait for next. you_are_a_tease. i mean that in the best way possible. ^_*
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou (who isn't signed in) On: September 01, 2005 07:39 CDT
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wow... that's all i can really think of now. it was incredibly hot and incredibly sexy and i had to change my panties afterwards. (glad i wore panties today) first, i would like to say, his nipple! i am shocked. and incredibly approving. (c'mere, let me play with the nipple ring... *drool*) oohs... now what is sephy going to use that tongue ring for? i can't wait! (c'mere, let me play with that tongue ring... *melts*) okay, before i become a blob of hentai, let me say that it was another great chapter. i like the way you've written this story. it's exciting because it's happening as you read it, not in the past. and the pace is bloody brilliant. it's a great story. i look forward to the next chapter and what sephy does to sesshy...
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Title: Yummy!
Reviewed By: Comfort_and_Joi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you finish the next chapter soon :) Very sexy couple. *drool*
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Reviewed By: Aiakia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 02:58 CDT
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Waah. You just can't stop if there...holy ba-jesus. I'll be in a state of unrest until I read the lemon. You are truly evil! lol j/k please update.
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Title: two words
Reviewed By: Sesshie On: August 05, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said two words Down Boy
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Title: Why are you trying to kill me?
Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Looks at his lap, the back up at his friend Youkai who has betrayed him by not putting out the fucking lemon before he dies* I will get you for this. I'm breathing heavy and my jaw in clenched. I had to tie my hair up, because I swear it's hot in here. That... was not.... fair.
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Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up! Cant wait for more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: peachesncream On: August 01, 2005 08:15 CDT
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Another great chapter you've written, very entertaining and hot.Sephiroth has a pierced tongue,that was sizzling.I still worship the way you are doing this story.Wicked cliffhangers in every chapter.You have a good grasp on everything concerning these two men.I give you a standing ovation for keeping both of these men in personality.I despise how so many make them dreamy and soft.LOVE THIS STORY!UPDATE SOON!PRETTY PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME WAIT AS LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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