| "Six Years is a Long Time Wait" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Six Years is a Long Time Wait
Reviewed By: Bahamian Royalty On: June 02, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it to be to short but was very enjoyable
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Reviewed By: Galacia On: May 11, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story alot and hope you get a chance to update soon! Jynx: Hmm.. Goten had a very strange and complex dream. So I see two options: A) It's just Goten's own thoughts and deepest fears showing theirselves. B) There is a possiblity of it actually happening. You never know. But I am enjoying it too so more please! I think the other three muses enjoyed it too but thankfully for you they are being quiet right now. This fic is getting interesting and I would love to see more as soon as you can give us it. Yeah I know what being busy can be like Good luck with all that. Hmm.. Was it really all just a dream or one of those odd possible foreshadowing things? Questions Questions one especially being how will Trunks take it?
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Title: six years is a long time to wait
Reviewed By: breal_blood_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ur doing an awsome job with the story. you left it at a really good cliff hanger. plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: ShinjiH On: March 25, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good writing. I just finished reading Chapter 2. You have an interesting story there. Even though I'm not a yaoi fan, it was fun to read.
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Reviewed By: Agent Y On: March 14, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is just some friendly critisism so dont hate me. i like the overall story and the idea, but i think you should look over it because some things dont make any sence. and maybe you could use more puncuation, again just friendly critisism, dont kill me
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Reviewed By: Jess the P1rate On: March 10, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY It was good. I like your use of imagery and such, and... such. I hope it gets really angsty soon!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: aussie15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
great story update soon
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Reviewed By: Zora Kasshu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story keep up the good work update soon for me because I hate cliffhangers so hurry update update please and thank you^_^
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