| "Just A Fantasy II: The Sequel" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 19:56 CST
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Oh, oh my god. *swallow* Perhaps I have a lot in common with Ryou...but, with the blindfold, and the "breakfast", and...well, sensual, definitely. It is awesome! Please update soon!
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Title: Yummy.
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugary sweet. I loved it! You really should update this soon. I read your other 'Just A Fantasy.' Just as superb as this this one. Though I think this is a little better, especially since there will be two people with Ryou. I'm not a big fan of Honda/Tristan, but you make the story so good... Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 18:56 CST
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! UPDATE THIS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to read the hot part!!!!!!!!!! :'(:'(:'(:'(
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: March 22, 2005 14:56 CST
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OMG... even I was beginning to feel the heat! Don't leave this alone... I really need an update now! Damn... gotta go find a fan now to cool off... perhaps a cold shower...
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Reviewed By: Amari_kun On: March 21, 2005 21:21 CST
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Ack, you stopped THERE?! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too busy drooling to log in) On: March 21, 2005 11:57 CST
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that was great. *wipes drool off of computer* Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 11:44 CST
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Woah truely amazing and hot and wow! Ryou comes up with some great fantasies! Loving this one as much as your other one, although can't wait for a Jou/Kaiba...pushy sod ain't I. Anyway update fast!
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Reviewed By: Kat-chan89 On: March 13, 2005 18:30 CST
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Hey! I know you!! I saw the first part of this on either AFF or FFnet, can't remember... But anyway, so glad it's being continued! Please update soon! (if you're able to, could you email me when you update? ^^;; silverdolphin1489[at]sbcglobal[dot]net thanks. ^^)
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too sick to log in) On: March 10, 2005 11:40 CST
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This is amazing keep going.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: March 09, 2005 13:48 CST
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Hella perfect! You're giving us more of Ryou's fantasies, Yay! Gods, you gotta update this one fast, ok? I so can't wait!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 13:29 CST
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Oh God. that is going to be great. Can`t wait.
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