| "The Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Sakota
Reviewed By: HikariMakaiNekoTenmaoftheHigashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...Sakota? One. I'm a girl. Two. I know I'm rude and I thank you for noticing. Three. Kai's my RL friend and I'm just teasing him about it cuz I'm the one who pointed it out to him. So don't get all "gotta go kill someone" on me, kays?
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari your so rude!!!! still like the story! its still one of my fave inu-yasha fanfictions and I have something to do *graves dager* c-ya till next time and keep up the good work Ja ne! *goes to find Hikari to kill him*
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Reviewed By: HikariMakaiNekoTenmaoftheHigashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*still laughing her head off* I laugh at you! And when I stop laughing at you, I'll laugh at you on the inside!!! Lmao anyway...it was hilarious...Maraca and Agnosia...it's great...Lmao "Agnosia, you're so rude." Kagome snapped.
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Title: Review from Hikari
Reviewed By: HikariMakaiNekoTenmaoftheHigashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. This is a really good fic, Kai. The only objection that I have with it at the moment would be the first chapter. It's a block of text, that's it. It makes the fic seem really long and intimidating. So what I would suggest is going back and just putting in the indents and double line spaces like you did in chapters 2 and 3. Otherwise, it's really good and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why pleaple don't revew incloding to your story its good, one of the best Inu-yasha storys I'v read its sad, happy, oh its just something in its oun class please keep! please update soon!
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