| "The Four Swords" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Keep writing!
Reviewed By: shirtlessguy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Keep writing it, it brings about a different view of the revolution!
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Reviewed By: steelphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please continue! I love this! About the ratings above... I had to lower some of the ratings, due to the first few chapters. The excess of dialogue makes them quite confusing. I was considering not reading any more... but I kept reading, and was rewarded! This has developed into a very lovely plot. I like the way you've developed the characters. Mieko is a very 3D character, excellently drawn. She has real life and spirit to her. Souji, Souzou and Aoshi are very nicely interpreted, as well. The recognisable characteristics are subtly wound with other characteristics, to make them all real. I hope to see more wonderful action, and since there's romance as one of the genres, I'm looking forward to that... Please update!
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Reviewed By: prantik_c On: April 21, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work pal.Keep it up.Please post the next chapter quickly.
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Reviewed By: solarscorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great. i like it alot. it was very confusing at first, but it is a little more clear now. it is sad that more people haven't read it yet. keep up the great wrok and i look forward to updates!
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