Reviewed By: SnowBlossom14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2001 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's ALOT of good news and theres a little bad news.. (about your fic)
Of course, good news is always heard fisrt so:
1. I loved it! It was overall well written.
2. Love the way you put the story.
3. I love E+T and S+S, so theres a factor.
4. Actually made me smile a bit and laugh at times.
5. Like the ghost thingy.. (dun ask why i used the particular word 'thingy'.
6. I think its really cute!
7. The sleepover was creative.
Bad news *not that bad but you can work on it*:
1. A few spelling errors, but that happens to me all the time, lol.
2. the scenes switched a bit to fast, but thats ok.
3. Could'nt Eriol use his magic? He had very powerful magic at the time.
4. Sakura could have used the light or the glow card instead of the fiery card.
5. Could have had more of an ending.. *like thats a bad thing? O.o;*
This isnt a flame, I dont want you to feel bad or anything. Its just a few pointers from my opinion. Though I REALLY liked this fiction, It was overall Great! ^__^ Im sure you'll be a great writer soon! I'll expect more from you! lol, just kidding ^_^ kay this review is WAY long.. kay, Ja Ne!~ ^_^
-SnowBlossom14
P.S. keep it up! ^______^ |
