| "Of Princesses and Space Pirates" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 12:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz write more soon this is getting good did i
mention I dislike cliff hangers which many people seen to do anywayz write soon |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man it has been forever since you have updated. You need to do it more often. It was a good chapter, and i can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: MHTorringjan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the better crossovers that I've seen in a long while. I like the reasonable way that you combined the two alternate storylines (giving an actual reason instead of saying, "hey, here's two people who meet!"). The characteriation is well done for the most part, although I've got mixed feelings about the argument that lead to Ryoko and Sasami leaving. I suppose it was kind of important to the plot, but I just don't think that Tenchi would react like that to one of their normal "squabbles." Well, anyway. Other than that little thing, it's a good story, and I'll be interested to read more! ;-) |
Reviewed By: Johny_lee On: June 29, 2002 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its great!I need more, more MORE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: little washu On: May 23, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it pleaaassssseeeee finish so i can read the rest!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good, realy good. Update soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
oh god WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE!
*going crazy*this story is great
keep it up K ;D |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: March 29, 2002 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Who's the guy in ch.5 that talks to Ryoko? UPDATE! Man this is one heck of a fic & I check ur fan fic every day to see if you've cont.! So please cont.!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for a while now, will you please update. Seriously you are writing a fab. fic and you leave us on a cliffhanger, that is no way to treat your readers. SO please update!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mandy200@aol.com On: February 21, 2002 19:46 CST
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oooooooo, your good! continue! |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: February 21, 2002 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! Don't leave me on a cliffhanger!!! I want more! I love this fan fic!!! Write more!!! *starts to yell* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Sry! Sometimes I get a little out of hand! *sweatdrop* |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! I like how this is turning out. I bet it's hard to make a Tenchi/Outlaw Star crossie. This kinda gives me an idea of an Outlaw Star Songfic... |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Change your font! The screen's all stretched out and I have to scroll side to side to read it. It wasn't like that on FFN, I don't think. Good job! |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey cool, this is on Mediaminer too. I can't remember where I left off though... |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: November 08, 2001 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your prologue. It really keeps the characters, well, in character. As for a Tenchi/Outlaw Star crossover, that sounds like a great idea! I hope the story works out well. It has potential. |
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