| "Of Princesses and Space Pirates" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: of princesses and space pirates
Reviewed By: Sgirl324 On: May 14, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPlease! Please! make Jim and Sasami a couple they would sooooooooooooo cute together! countinue please!
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Title: of princesses and space pirates
Reviewed By: Sgirl324 On: May 14, 2005 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just one question are you planing to have Jim and Sasami as a couple or just friends? because they would look gteat as a couple. they could be just as popular as S+S couple write back soon
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Reviewed By: GameGirl (not logged in) On: March 06, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
did I review this on fanfiction.net? *scratches head* well, this is great, MJ!
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Reviewed By: GLH On: March 04, 2005 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I greatly enjoy this story, though it saddens me to see that you've abandoned it for the time being.
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Reviewed By: LunarMoonGirl On: July 09, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job and plaese write more because on the last chapter9 i think that could b little washu
don't mind my splling sooo
plaese keeb going plaese |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!! This chapter was good. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww you still havent updated no fair!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ; D On: July 27, 2002 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
ppppppppppppuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhlllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hurry up with the update! Yes, it's me, again |
Reviewed By: ; D On: July 27, 2002 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, PUHLEEEEEEEEEZE!!!!!!!!! Don't take so long with the next update!!! I can't take the anticipation!aaaaaaaaggggggghhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!
oh yeah, great story luv it!!!! so remember, hurry uuuuuppppppp!!!!!!!!!! have sasami slap Ayeka or something- don't let her get soft on her sis and tenchi. Also you still need to fix your font. It's definitely not as bad as it was earlier *thanx* but i still have to scroll sideways : |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 12:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz write more soon this is getting good did i
mention I dislike cliff hangers which many people seen to do anywayz write soon |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man it has been forever since you have updated. You need to do it more often. It was a good chapter, and i can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: MHTorringjan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the better crossovers that I've seen in a long while. I like the reasonable way that you combined the two alternate storylines (giving an actual reason instead of saying, "hey, here's two people who meet!"). The characteriation is well done for the most part, although I've got mixed feelings about the argument that lead to Ryoko and Sasami leaving. I suppose it was kind of important to the plot, but I just don't think that Tenchi would react like that to one of their normal "squabbles." Well, anyway. Other than that little thing, it's a good story, and I'll be interested to read more! ;-) |
Reviewed By: Johny_lee On: June 29, 2002 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its great!I need more, more MORE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: little washu On: May 23, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it pleaaassssseeeee finish so i can read the rest!!!!!! |
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