| "Sister of the Forbidden Child" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: xPyscho_fire_WolfX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is GREAT, but sooo saddd!!! i still love it tho
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Reviewed By: xPyscho_fire_WolfX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is GREAT, but sooo saddd!!! i still love it tho
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Reviewed By: ensatsukokuryuha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
No offensive or anything, but your grammer and spelling aren't too good. It would be a lot better if you worked on that. The story is ok for the most part, however, I find it odd that Hieina is already a high A-class demon already, but then again it is your story and you write it how you want. That and Hiei did get the Jagan implant causing his spiritual powers to weaken, so I guess since I was comparing powers to him at the time this story takes place I guess it works ok now that I think about it. Anyway, forgive me if you don't like this review, but I didn't me for this to be a flame, but rather constructive critizism. Anyway, you really don't have to take my advise, but I at least want you to be aware of some things you could work on to make your story better.
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Title: heeellloooooo
Reviewed By: frank, the franken stine On: March 26, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kwellll!!!! im frank...kewl..hahahah lol anyway great story! keep it up!!! team up, team up! are you up for it? Its hard to save the world when your falling in lovvvveee...srry i was just wacthing mew mew power! lol
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Reviewed By: AngelTears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 12:01 CST
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Thank you..
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Title: This is so fun! Keep Writing!
Reviewed By: LubHAruka On: March 12, 2005 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read to chapter 2 and it was awsome!!! KEEP IT UP!!!! IF YOU STOP I"LL GO CRAZY!!!! Literally! SO keep it up and try to make as much chapters you can and your story ROCKS!!!! I wish I could write something cool like this! Keep it UP! Ooopppsss! GOMen I said that to many times!
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: AngelTears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:37 CST
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Thank you for reviewing my fanfic. Now I get more support to write more fanfics.
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Reviewed By: lolly pop On: March 11, 2005 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not much to say but ......wow!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Puppy973277 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 14:59 CST
Comment/Review:
please update you have an awsome story... peace out
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Title: helllooooo
Reviewed By: ange34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your doing a relly good job! i wish i was a good writer too, but it appears im not. None the less this is getting to be an interesting story and man you can update fast! well thats my R&R for now
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: ange34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story and if you put some time in it its sure to be succesfull so update soon
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Reviewed By: Jet_black not loged in On: March 10, 2005 13:35 CST
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Cute... i like it... but i thought it was the fact that Hiei is male that he was forbidden... or maybe it is because he's both fire and ice o.o;; idk!! ok i g2g look it up! update pleaze!!
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