| "Finding True Love" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: Please
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 23:13 CDT
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I really enjoy your writing and I would love for you to post this story on my site. It's completely new and I don't have any authors. There absolutley no plagiarism and theres no fee to join or view the site. I would appreciate it if you would email me and we can get started. Nahaujaret@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the concept for the story, but the characters were a little...out of character. Some things mentioned in their speech and their surroundings were too modern. But I do believe you have potential and I hope to read more of your work and see it improve. But this is NOT a flame, and I know you have a writers passion. Good job!
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Reviewed By: britbrat On: July 20, 2005 18:09 CDT
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omg... so that's it? your done? NOOOOO! wow, that's a bummer. well good fic peace out and good luck with the miroku/sango fic!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i love the way its going
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 18:25 CDT
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: britbrat On: July 15, 2005 00:52 CDT
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hey this is a good fic. although, all those "this sesshomaru" were getting annoying. it was still really good but i don't think he ALWAYS talks like that. sometimes he uses "I". PLEASE UPDATE SOON! good fic.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 05:49 CDT
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:24 CDT
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OMG i love this fic... i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:18 CDT
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YAY!! UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:02 CDT
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YAY!!UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: mikaela On: June 29, 2005 10:28 CDT
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Great story, please continue!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:33 CDT
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gaaaaa!!!! evil cliffie!! let's see, first you got blushes, then hand holding/hugs, then kissey stuffs, LEMONY FUN!!! ^_^ and then childs. good enough? the fun romance stuffs. k, update soon please. ja!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 22:56 CDT
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not much to say. good update, and some fun fluff. ^_^ update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:52 CDT
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my head is killing me right now, so all I'll say is that it's still good and I hope you can update later. Hope you have fun at prom. ja!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE IT I RILLY LOVE IT XD
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Reviewed By: Foglia On: May 01, 2005 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another chapter, thank you, thank you! Cant wait for another one.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 20:36 CDT
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yay, an update. do it again soon and stuffs. ja! *walks away for sugar mumbling about it's the spot on the wall's fault that she's sick.*
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 17:01 CDT
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do whatever you want with your fic, just don't kill Rin or Shessh and I'm happy. I've seen authors kill their main character before. update again and uh...forgot, damn. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: gumi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooohhhh! I really really like this story! Kohaku and Rin are so cute and I love how you keep the emotions straight between Sesshomaru and Rin. I also like the present part, I am interested to see what Kouga does and if Sess or Kohaku will show ( unless Kohaku's gone! x.x; )You have got to update! ^-^
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!
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Title: Evil Non-Reviewers
Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:21 CDT
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HI! you gots a good fic goen'. uh..ya I hate the evil non reviewr people too. I just smack them all with a shoe until they review. Or at least I envision mysef doing that. whelps, I gotta go. update again soon and stuffs. so, bye!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: no_touchy_my_sesshy On: March 29, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! When will sesshy come into this scene? What will he come as? Is the person that escaped from the bandits kagome? I was pretty sure but...You never said a name I don't think...What about inuyasha? And Shippou? Write more chapters! Your story sucked me in and now I find that you stopped at the interesting part now you make people suffer! OK I don't know if it's only me but in any case please continue soon. I often check up on good stories so I review each story once a day so...if nothing else I will review! ^_^ So... I will review every day for you! Great story! I love the ideas! I was amazed by the strange idea of kagome being capture but, are the bandits anyone in particular? what about kouga? isn't he the one with the wolves? Will Sesshomaru show up infront of kagome or rin/ or will kagome meet rin then sesshomaru? So many questions that could be answered by the next chapter so please update your excelent story!
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Title: hint: I'm making fun of people who dont review......
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 (simply cus im too lazy to log in) On: March 21, 2005 04:42 CST
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Well seeing as how its an exceptionaly exquisite peice of literature I will take the 64 seconds from my day to make my presence known here (translation: You better update cuz this is the best!) Good day.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 17:04 CST
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oooo...me likey...UPDATE!!!!
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