Title: when luv falls Reviewed By:mizz-fine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 14:48 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: On monday morrning it was there year off colleage. kagoma walks thourght the halls to the gym.principal:good morrning every one i SAID GOOD MORRNING EVER one as she smiles inuyasha:what soming won with u mouth bitch.every one:ohhhhhh principal:thats it time to pick room mates but not u inuyasha inuyasha:what now what did i do kagoma:as if u did not do anything u little motherfucker principla:stop it now u no whatu guys can sure rooms (both of them:nooooooooooooo am going to die principal:and when ur finish inuyasha come to my room i mine office kagoma:at least u mark will go up and maybe u will be the new teacherfucker dont be sad she wont hit u to hard (laughter)inuysha and kagoma walks to there room both of them oh no there is one bed what the fuck they both look at each other kagoma well just trie and to be contured
Reviewed By:mizz-fine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 14:13 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
